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So آپ want to make your player یا your reader to do something specifically یا to think something specifically. How can آپ do it? Do آپ first make remote mind controller? No. Save yourself the money, and save yourself the stress of having to build that kind of a machine. There is another way to control a player's یا reader's mind. It's called the "controlling idea".

Think of the movie inception, but take out all the epic sci-fi of someone going into another's mind, and put آپ and another person logged into Fanpop in two different parts of the world. With a controlling idea, what آپ do is prime the player's یا reader's mind to have certain thoughts. All of our brains hate gaps, so they either try to fill in the gap, یا compel the person the mind belongs to to seek out answers. What does this mean? Naturally, they will attempt to predict what you're trying to pull, but if that fails, then they will take action and fall right into your... umm... "trap", I should say.

Here's how it works:

You're host, and آپ have someone playing a... say... mystery RPG, and آپ tell them that they "are in a room that is dark, but not pitch black." Right there, that implies that there must be some kind of light ذریعہ somewhere, but the player won't prioritize that first as they... May not think that, دیا that... It's kind of not important whether یا not the room is lit (unless آپ make it important).

Afterwards, آپ write "and there is a door." This one is the juicy one. Say I placed a Pirrhana Plant behind the door, but it's sleeping. Naturally, like a blind mouse, the player will go to the door, and try to open it. When they do, the Plant will have something to eat. (Hehehe...)

Now in an article, here's how it works.

If آپ say "oh, that کنسرٹ was terrible," but haven't دیا any information about how our why the کنسرٹ was terrible, that is what they will ask themselves. Try to predict why? Could be a multitude of things, so they fail at predicting and keep reading looking for answers. Also, if information is implied but not exactly stated, آپ can have a bit of fun with that too.

"There were sounds of pleasurable intercourse coming from the اگلے room. Out of curiosity, یا out of his sheer pervertedness, he opened the door, revealing a CD player with that soundtrack set on loop."

So, what did آپ think I had in that room before I told آپ it was a CD player, آپ dirty minded person?

And that, my friends, is how آپ control the minds of your players and readers.

Sayonara!

-Prowd
posted by ShadowFan100
Character Chart
Character's full name: Jonathan Grey King
Reason یا meaning of name: none
Character's nickname: None
Reason for nickname: None
Birth date: 3/3/1970
Powers: Lazor
Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: 43
How old does he/she appear: 33
Weight: 57 pounds
Height: 5ft
Body build: slim
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Green
Glasses یا contacts: None
Skin tone: Tan
Predominant features: IDK
Type of hair: Thik
Hairstyle: Like Shock, but with extra spikes hanging down on each side of his face
Voice: Kinda deep, with a Doggerian accent (American)
Overall attractiveness: Average
Physical disabilities: None
Usual...
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posted by ShadowFan100
Character Chart
Character's full name: Akiyo Kayako
Reason یا meaning of name: none
Character's nickname: None
Reason for nickname: None
Birth date: 8/5/1941
Powers: Shadow power
Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: 72
How old does he/she appear: About 37
Weight: 51 pounds
Height: 4ft 9in
Body build: slim
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Red
Glasses یا contacts: None
Skin tone: Tan
Predominant features: IDK
Type of hair: Thik
Hairstyle: 3 spikes in the back with some فر, سمور hanging over each side of his head
Voice: Medium. Deep
Overall attractiveness: Old
Physical disabilities: None
Usual fashion of dress:A Red Samurai-looking...
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posted by CosmoLuvsTails
Helu.
I, personally, think I have too many fcs to use. There's too many even to remember. So, I've decided to either give them away یا to get rid of them completely.
Ones I'm definitely keeping include:
Amber Prower
Kyoko Otonashi
River Spark
and their evil forms and families (but not all of Amber's family is staying. She's got 12, mainly dead, siblings I don't do anything with, and Victoria's only gonna be referenced, as she's possibly getting cut.)
So, I'd like to know...
Are there any other characters you'd prefer me keeping? یا is anyone interested in adopting characters?
For adoptions, آپ need to send me a picture you've done of the charrie آپ want, and I'll choose if there's مزید than one person that wants them.
Thanks for your time :3
CLT
A grave mistake was made...very grave...Ⓧ

MTL was running from the tall figure at this point,but suddenly he found himself at a cliff,with the tall figure closing in,it left MTL with two options:A,take a rotted,old vine to the other side یا B,Jump.MTL with his keen instincts jumped.the figure vanished.MTL land pretty hard two the point where his legs shattered into nanites,he quickly restored his legs.he ran to a old well,there was something shiny at the bottom,but the rope and bucket were rusted...and it started to rain,but to MTL's luck,a vine slid down,it had a old rusty hook attached to...
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posted by ShadowWolf337
Blood's Past
Chapter three
A Strange Event
(I guess I now have to call Miles, Blood)
Three years later...
"Dad I don't know if آپ can hear me but yesterday was Zoey's and my birthday we're both thirteen come on Dad آپ can fight this..." Blood said, "Im sorry visiting hours are done آپ will have to leave" کہا one of the nurses "give me a second, Dad I love آپ please just wake up, okay Im leaving" Blood walks out the hospital, Zoey walks up to Blood "Visiting Dad?" she کہا "yeah still nothing" Blood's left hand electrifys then stops "okay what was that?" he looks at his hand "Weird"
added by Evolia-Wulf
Source: I drew this, however this belongs to Lillycat on DeviantArt
added by Jordan-TheFox
Source: My awsome friend Kynnewolf on DA
After Casey had left, Kyle had gone back to sitting around in his house. His family had gathered in the living room, which meant that they all began talking amongst themselves in sharing stories and talking about what had been going on lately in their lives. They all enjoyed the family time and the family bonding; with everyone being busy lately, it had been impossible for them to all sit down and enjoy seeing and talking to each other like a close family should. They all continued spending time together and talking until the time for رات کے کھانے, شام کا کھانا rolled around, which meant that Jacob and Kushina...
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added by AshelyxSonic26
Source: Me (c) Ashelyxsonic26
The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 15


The male was a murky green hedgehog. He wore a grey Tee شرٹ, قمیض and long grey pants, along with black sunglasses. He paced back and forth in front of a bench in the middle of a city. It was not in a park, but مزید a small garden of a sort. There was a small mound of گھاس with a درخت upon a concrete surface behind the bench, with a few others near.

He was limping as he walked, allowing him to notice many things due to how slow this made him. He noticed as he paced that one time, upon turning around, a girl appeared on the opposite side of the bench, leaning on its backside,...
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Name (full): Rynk “Hellborn”

Age: Erm… traditionally she’s 15, so… fifteen.

Gender: Male… FEMALE X{D

Species: Erm… oh boy
~Acid Monster 30 %
~Banshee Mobian 30 %
~Identity 10 %
~Mobian Core 10 %
~Xorda Mobian 10 %
~ Lynx 10 %

Abilities: … I’ll فہرست abilities and weaknesses to avoid stu-ness
Acid Monster abilities
~Acid… yeah
Weaknesses
~Water increases فر, سمور and hair, as over-exposure is damaging
~ Not too sure but I think Acid monsters might be a bit fragile

Banshee Mobian Abilities
~Metal Bones (the metal bone abilities transfers to all DNA’s)
~Flight (via a web-like substance...
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posted by mephiles97
Chapter 2: Early Morning Search
Location: Waktini family residence, Northern District, Freedom City
Date: Saturday, January 3rd
Time: 7:02 A.M.



Kyle's eyes slowly began to open slowly, clouded over due to just waking up. He turned over slightly, staring up at the ceiling as early morning sunlight shined in through his window blind, casting a warm glow all around the room. He slowly pulled his blankets off of himself, sitting up in his bed. He yawned loudly before standing up and shuffling out of the bedroom.

Kyle stood outside his bedroom door, listening for any sounds. He didn't hear anything,...
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Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if آپ missed it.
link
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are آپ doing?!" A prisoner shouted. مزید heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
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THE EGGMAN MECH whatched as the train passed by; then he threw a sticky bomb on it and set the timer for 3:00. The bot flew off.


Trance let Windy go.
"Were are آپ guys going?" he asked Windy.
"Wherever the train takes us."
Trance laughed.
"Same as always eh? I'm glad to see that آپ brought along your boyfreind Spike."
Windy turned a little red in the face.
"He is NOT my boyfreind!"
"Is too"
"Is not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"To!"
They argued for some time.
"NOT!!!!!" Windy yelled while covering her face trying not to giggle a bit.
Trance looked at Spike.
"Just joking around a little!"
Spike didn't answer. He thought...
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THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do آپ wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit مزید alert.
The train sped by. They all...
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Chapter four: That’s Chells
Location: 66 Jazon Ave, Lexistropolis
Date: Sunday, November 30th 4337
Time: 8:51 P.M.

Tess and Zen Solomon, had finally made their way back to their neighborhood, panting and sweating; trying to think of an excuse as to how they would explain being at Lizzy’s house till eight thirty, of which they were to be home, and then heading off to go help their parents finish moving a friend into his new house. They knew that their parents would be cross; they just didn’t know how they would get out of it.

When they arrived home, there was a note on the dining room table....
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"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ کہا to Emily. "Ok thank آپ AJ."Emily کہا to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca کہا yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one کہا in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...
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First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu یا Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If آپ don't know the whole issue, here's some سوالات I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...
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posted by sierradawn9
As the لومڑی noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a ماہ ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. فنچ inhabits it.Dr. فنچ was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the لومڑی wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very سب, سب سے اوپر of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young لومڑی knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...
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