I am write a book a lot like ellen hopkins. here go? do u like it یا not please comment!

Dear Monster
why did u took away my uncle
how did u do it
i hate u
why did u took my innocent uncle why
monster leave them alone
i need them
i miss them a lots
i never got to know them because of u
please give them back
monster leave them now!

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emmaterry said:
i would say some advice,but im not big on poatry.I say no.
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please give me some advice
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lunamoonas said:
Despite the spelling being painful to read... it just seems to lack the emotion that Ellen Hopkins can put in to her writing. This doesn't seem to be meaningful, it just looks like آپ tried to copy her style, not adapt it into your own. Can't get emotion from focusing on copying someone's style.
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