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Firewriter said:
It will depend if آپ have your story in third یا first person view, but it mainly depends on if آپ want the main character to be on the defense یا to be the attacker. If he/she is on the defense, mainly have the attacker come out of nowhere. Describe the best آپ can how the main character is feeling. Emotionally and physically. Is he panting, sweating, going blurry eyed, fighting strongly یا weakly, is he/she feeling scared, emotionally numb, fierce, angry, etc. If your character is the attacker, mainly if آپ want it to be dramatic, have the opponent appear unexpected of the main character/attacker. If آپ want to be gruesome, describe things. The scene, is it dark, cobblestone ground, starless cloudy sky, etc. During the fight, is there blood? Are your character holding weapons? If so, what kind and how are they holding it? With a deathly grip, weakly, shakily, innexperienced... etc. I'm sorry for the super long reply, but I hope i could help.
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