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As I enter the kitchen, I see my mom chopping carrots and putting them in a pot full of stew. "Hi Mom! What's that?" My long citrus مالٹا, نارنگی سکرٹ, گھیرنا sways underneath the air conditioning vent. "I'm making vegetable stew. KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK. "I'll get it!" I call. I run towards the wooden door and I turn the bronze-colored knob. A man with shaggy dark brown hair appears behind the door. "Hello. Is your mother here?" Who is this guy? "Yes. She's in the kitchen." I make a left towards the small باورچی خانے, باورچی خانہ and my mom looks at me. "It's for you." I mouth the words silently. "Oh!" My mom, walks to the door to chat with the man. "Hello Daniel!" Daniel? Who is Daniel? Could that man be Daniel? I don't trust him. He looks...suspicious. As I walk towards my room, I see my mom hugging Daniel. "This can't be happening." I mumble to myself.

With my door wide open, my mom enters the room without knocking. "Chanhassen," she starts. I look up from my homework and see my mom is dressed up in her business clothes. "Why are آپ dressed like that, mom?" She stares down at her outfit. "What do آپ mean? I'm going to work." Work? "Work? Now? Why?" I'm good at asking questions! "Daniel will be driving me to work. We had an emergency meeting. I'll be back in about an گھنٹہ and a half." She kisses my cheek and runs out the door in her tight black dress underneath her black blazer. "Mom?" I yell. "Yes dear?" She peeks her head through the door. "Ummm...nothing." I shake my head. "Oh. Ok." She nods.

I watch Land of the Lost every time it comes on T.V. Tonight is the newest episode. Where is my mom? It's been three hours! "Huh?" The door knob makes a sound and I see the door open. It's my mom. "Mom!" I run towards her and hug her. "Uh-oh." I whisper. Daniel is behind my mom. "What are آپ doing here?" I snap at him. "Chanhassen!" My mom says. "I was just dropping your mother off. I'll be leaving. I just need to use the restroom." Good! Before he heads for the bathroom, he grabs my rare china bowl from the side میز, جدول in the living room. He slowly puts it in his pocket. I gasp.
posted by hannah_vampire
He didnt come after me but I was scared and I didnt know what to do, I didn't stop running and I dont think I will.

Just then someone grabbed me and I punched him " Belle stop dont worry, Hun whats wrong". It was damon 'OMG Damon sorry' I hugged him and Soon as I knew it I was in his bedroom. He looked at me and was studying me in a way ' What happened to you're arms and you're hand' He saw the brusing shit!

'Nothing at all dont worry' I looked down and tears starting to come rolling down my cheek, Damon let go of me ' He did this! i swear i will kill him' I got up and grabbed his arm and looked...
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This is something I'm working on.. It's the first long piece I've attempted. People often told me I'm too good at imagery and تفصیل to write anything short. Perhaps I use too much imagery? I'm curious about what آپ guys think.

I already know it's a bit shakey at some parts. I still need to do some revising. I revise every time I finish reading a book. I feel each book teaches me مزید and مزید about writing.


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Welcome to Birchmoss
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(This was just a part of my planning and organization. It is subject to change)

Violet kept her skeletons right where they belonged. Hidden away...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s دن party. Just a few مزید steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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so...her it goes:P

Actors:
~Ecem
~Sari
~selen
~sara
~rumeysa
~sevde
~sevde
~dursun
~sufian
~firas
~roberto
~alex
~anthony
...
Scene starts off in class,the first دن at school,everybody looking tired,waiting for they're form teacher to be presented.
(a moment of silence as the door slowly opens...I'll be helping on that one!...and a creepy looking teacher steps inside the class-room)
(ACT 1)
Radu:(low and dark voice) Hello....everybody Im your new teacher as we all~~

Alex: yeah,yeah we know,we know

Radu:(laughs sinisterly)you'd wished آپ didnt say that.NOW...you've been..."disrespectful" to the teacher,come outside...
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posted by Annacrombie
This is writen in the point of view of Kara
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Kara stood in apartment and stared out of thr window, just a few moments پہلے someone stopped her from jumping off her flat roof.

"Kara..."the voice said, it was the same voice of the man who saved her.

Kara looked at the time, it was 11.48. She yawned and went into her bedroom.After getting changed she slipped into her bed.That voice ringed through her ears."Kara....".She closed her eyes and almost fell asleep when she herd someone call her name "Kara...."

There was a knock on the front door, Kara grabbed her dressing گاؤن, gown and put on her slippers. She walked over to the door and opened it. There was a piece of paper on the floor with wriing on it. I was a note, on the note was written in 7 days all will be alright

Kara awoke from her bed, had it all been a dream? Kara noticed that she had the note in her hand.She read the note over and over again. What did it mean?
posted by Liisamyts
CHAPTER 2
A picture of a young blond man was shining on the screen, it was Jacob, their brother, the one who always held it together when everything was falling apart. Adele snuggled closer to her brother. And for once, he didn't push her away, instead, he just held her, not speaking a word.”He promised! He promised he would come ہوم early tonight!” she managed to say between her sobs. Then she burst into tears again. Simon held her until she fell asleep, tears still on her cheeks. He carried his sister up to her bed, where she could be far away from the pain. Dreaming, seeing mom, dad,...
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Words:

Words flooded my mind,
And some I could taste on the tip of my tongue.
A few flowed out of my mouth,
But that was just some.

There are so many words
As they creep up my throat
On the tip on my tongue, splintering words.
But something surrounds my mouth, like a moat,
And I can't spit them out.

And the words, finally spill out of my mouth,
But they have no tone,
No whispers no shout.


Don't let it get to you:


Don't let it get to you,
The pain that creeps up your spine.
Don't let it get to you,
The pain that's inside.

A simple song,
Says مزید than you'd think
One things wrong,
آپ have no clue what it brings.

The decision is yours,
That's what آپ need to embrace,
The decision is yours,
Not someone else's to make.

A decision,
affects مزید than you'd think,
If your choice is wrong,
theres no telling what it will bring.

Don't let it get to you,
آپ don't have to choose me.
Dont let it get to you,
Let your decision be free.
CHAPTER 1

“Where the fuck is he?!” Simon was getting really pissed already. Jacob was supposed to be back an گھنٹہ ago. He promised Adele he wouldn't be late. While waiting, Simon turned on the TV. He laid down to the couch, drinking beer, waiting for the news to start. Adele came back from the kitchen, drinking سیب, ایپل juice, “I don't know. Calm down, please, Simon.” she replied. “And don't drink!”
“Why not?” Simon asked her.
“Because,” she said, grabbing the بیئر bottle from him, throwing it away, “First, you're not old enough to be drinking, you're fifteen, if آپ hadn't...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I didn't know weither i should go back yet یا if I should just stay here for awhile like I کہا i would even though it feels weird but I dont have to go back I mean Damon یا Melissa could go.

I was sitting on Damons when he had walked in, 'hey Belle umm I thought آپ might be hungry so Here have this'. I know that the look on my face کہا are آپ kidding I am straving but I couldn't take it even though i decide to grabb it to be polite.

Four Days later

I hadn't been to school for four days and the only reason was because i know they would be their but I had to go back to Blairs because sooner...
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Hey, I need honest opinion on how I write and where I need to improve, this is a part of one of the stories I've written. Thanks to anyone who can help. =)


Fallenfeather wove through a dark, leafy forest, sunlight just barely filtered through. He walked confidently through the spiralling trees, all of his sense trained to catch the deer in the clearing ahead. As the chocolate brown بھیڑیا neared his goal, he sunk lower and stared with bright cerulean eyes at the swift-footed dear ahead of him. His muscles tensed as he prepared to leap after the small deer when suddenly a silver shape charged...
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Brightness night


The sun sets, the moon raises, night has begun, the moon smiles down on us as it shines it's light. the stars twinkle in one سے طرف کی one, and دن is done. the moon full, round and big hums it's playful tune. the starts, so bright shine it's light for everyone in sight, as they hum in tune with the moon.

Out side looking in


Laughter sailing out of the window, دوستوں talking quietly together, people dancing everywhere. and I'm on the out side looking in. All of them are havening fun as the twirl in the in crowd. All but one who looks out side, he smiles at me and i smile back...
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Me: okay well i finished the assignment and this is the final product...please don't hold back...okay here آپ go
ps. know that this is an religion assinment, and its about my interpretation of Jesus in an artistic form-ie-me using a collection of short poems and talking about the sea...okay i'll shuup now

Freedom
To feel the sand
The sun on your back
It’s a no man’s land
With no fear of attack
No chains of society
The sea frees all
Lose all your anxiety
And watch as the waves fall
God’s سیکنڈ heaven under the sun
Surrounding all things being
The sea will be undone
For those people foreseeing...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
I am bored with love
and it's passionless limbs
that drape over my bed
in a lethargic state of impotence
while wearing the same red heart
my soul picked up hitchhiking
off highway serendipity
Now here we are
alone in togetherness
trying to build dreams
with two سے طرف کی fours and glue,
but even a home
won't tie us together
when our hearts live alone
Poetic vows cliched
into nothingness
like all words do, eventually
and we allowed our bodies to become another pair of hollow shadows that make love to a wall
instead of each other
and we wonder why
the roses are dying
blood fills the faces of my fantasies
no mercy,you're trying to put me down
i can see clearly as you're taking a سوئنگ, جھول at me
come and i'll push آپ to the ground
what are آپ doing? what do آپ think this is doing to me?
you're taking all my faith
what are آپ leaving me now?!
i will make آپ suffer just like آپ made me suffer
i will watch آپ screaming and begging for forgiveness
all my hate can not be bound
i will not be bound سے طرف کی your darkest demons
so try to take my life and put me to the ground
i will follow آپ and torture آپ and i'll watch آپ screaming
look at the bloody faces smiling at you,taking آپ down and making آپ drown
i wanna kill آپ the same way آپ killed me
leaving me thoughtless
آپ can try to tell me that i'm worthless
but آپ can not break me down
gonna take آپ down because nothing in this world is going to save me
posted by Karartegirl99
Once upon a time There was a girl named Abby. She loved to talk. Her teachers eventually stopped calling on her.

One day, she talked during a آگ کے, آگ while a kid in her class was telling her teacher where the 17 other children were.
The teacher couldn't here her, and the تلاش for the children lasted twelve hours. During that time, a gang چرا لیا, چوری کی five computers, three cars, seventeen dogs, and blackmailed the mayor into giving them seven grand.

Abby was expelled from the school.
When she told her parents, they imediately looked for a school for her to go to.
But the only school that gave her acceptence was the class in the juvinille deliquent center.

So she was ہوم schooled.

But she caused her parents so much trouble that in a week they lost their all hair and were standing on the thin line between sanity and the nut house.

So they duct-taped her mouth shut.

THE END
posted by Flana_2
The forest was so beautiful. Even though it was raining, I thought of the sun peering through the trees. There were animals all over. It was like Japan only slightly less busy. Lots of unfamiliar animals gave Minrough high-fives and hugs. After a moment, I scanned his mind. Patients? I thought he کہا he was a soldier not a healer! After a minute, I demanded to know who they were.
“Patients”. Just like I thought.
“I thought آپ کہا آپ were a soldier at the war”!
“Yeah, a war of diseases”.
“But you’re only a kid! How could آپ be a doctor”?
“Not a doctor, healer”.
“How...
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posted by Flana_2
Hi! I’m Lisa, the newest of the Hoycan clan. My story of how I got here is a tale of braveness, bullies, and ocean water. So snuggle up with a great friend and a big bowl of پاپ کارن, پوپکارن and begin a journey like none other آپ ever come by!! GO ON!!!
Two gorges animals were running off into the moon light. Ones name was Lisa, the other was Brad.
“I love آپ Lisa” Brad said
“I love آپ too Brad”! They were a short distance away when RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The school گھنٹی, بیل rang for lunch. I awoken from my daydream and hurried out the door. Hi, I’m Lisa the average...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 love bites
love bites
Zack was still in his car, wanting so bad to go back to Kisa. He walked up to his house, opened the door and was immediately sucked into a vision. Kisa was going to get kidnapped and it was all because of Zack. Kisa got up and walked to her window, when she opened it she saw two guys in black coming up towards her.
She ran and locked the door, and all the windows, for some reason she just didn't fill safe. She opened her closet to hide, when a voice beside her said: "That won't work. The can smell آپ the can hear your دل beat." Kisa sung around ready to save her self, not looking at who...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
9: آپ and Me

“So Tristan, how do آپ fit into all this?” Alice asked him. He was sitting on a chair closest to the front of the carriage. He looked up from his book and sighed.
“Well, I was created in 1408, سے طرف کی two warlocks known as Magna and Dejan. They took me and molded me into the perfect creature-a creature with the ability to change into anything at will-human, animal, whatever-telepathy, soothsayer, I was the perfect creature. But there are some limits even the could not look past though they are few: I can’t grant wishes, not the way a genie can, I can’t kill anyone at all,...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
6: Uninvited

Three tall men, dressed in dark cloaks, stopped upon seeing the girls and simply stared. “Why have we stopped?” called a male voice from behind them. Suddenly, a man appeared from behind them, though they followed him like a shadow. “Ah. Company.” Rosalie and Alice looked at each other then back to the men. “No need to fear” the man that had come from behind the three much larger ones said. “We come in peace.”
“All of you?” Rosalie asked wearily, eyeing the three men suspiciously.
The man smiled and turned to the trio. “Stand down” he کہا firmly, though...
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