Hi! I was writing a novel a while back, but I got distracted. I have only written the first chapter. I feel as if I need better names for the characters. I believe I'm going to ترمیم the first chapter a lot and bring in some other characters. For the main 2 characters I was thinking I would name them something foreign that has a meaning to do with love, to be a little cutesy. Also, عنوان suggestions would help! If آپ choose to follow the link below the female character's description, let me know if آپ have any names for the 2 cheerleaders mentioned.
Edit: For 'Jo'/female I was looking up names that meant love and I found: Elin یا Eleen means most beautiful woman یا light. I also found Zuri, which is Swahili and means beautiful.
ترمیم 2: × For the female again: Eiltine, an irish name meaning lively. I still could use name suggestions, however. Please, tell me which of the 3 I found آپ like best for the female.
The novel is about a guy and a girl and the chapters switch back and forth from each of their POVs.
Rundown of what happens: Ever since Josepheenah کہا the words "I wish you'd just die, Eli," she has never stopped regretting them. Jo and Eli really got along until he decided to fall in love with her. Maybe they had loved each other all along, but it had never been کہا so it was never an issue. Eli loved the way the bright blue of her eyes could either pierce یا invite آپ in یا even both at the same time. He loved that reddish mess of hair that she had always hated. Eli found her laughter to be موسیقی to his ears. Her voice was melodic and always on key. Jo always knew what to say to him, until she says the last words Eli ever heard her say. She was confused. He knew she was dating his best friend. She was angry that he would even put her in that position. Yet, Eli would do anything Jo wanted. They were at her house at the time, so when Jo got up to get them a snack, he gave her what she asked for. Jo comes back to her room to find a note. She can't believe what she reads. She climbs over the windowsill after Eli, grabbing his shoe that must have fallen off on the way out. She runs to his house down the street. The door is wide open and his parents are not home. She rushes up the stares to his room but it is too late. On the mirror, painted with his own blood, were the words "I told آپ I would do ANYTHING for you, Jo. I love you.". Most of the time, things like this are permanent. Most of the time, there is no 'undo' button in life, but can life make an exception for these teenagers who were obviously meant to be?
Female تفصیل (Name that I used: Josepheenah/Jo)
Age: 17
Hobbies: anything artsy, making people smile and laugh
پسندیدہ Subject: Art
Seen as the: Optimist, artist
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: She's مزید than just a ball of sunshine, and sometimes, she's unhappy too.
Physical description: short, ginger, long wavy red hair normally pulled into loose pigtails, a bit of freckles around her cheekbones, bright blue eyes, not stick thin but not fat
To see the first chapter, written in the female (temporarily named Josepheenah)'s POV, link.
Male تفصیل (Temporarily named Eli)
Age: 18
Hobbies: Sports - especially baseball, soccer, track
پسندیدہ Subject: Math (and sports, of course)
Seen as the: Jock
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: He's not stupid! He gets straight A's, and he's no where near a jerk. The male temporarily named Eli is the sweetest guy آپ will ever meet. Athletes are not always jerks یا idiots!
Physical description: average height, blonde with a 'Beiber flip' hairstyle, he has a تل, مول below his left eye, orange-ish eyes, light زیتون skin tone, skinny
If there are any سوالات about the characters that I have failed to answer, I'll be happy to answer them. Thanks in advance for any advice! I'd be adding some drawings of the characters to the مضمون soon ;D
Edit: For 'Jo'/female I was looking up names that meant love and I found: Elin یا Eleen means most beautiful woman یا light. I also found Zuri, which is Swahili and means beautiful.
ترمیم 2: × For the female again: Eiltine, an irish name meaning lively. I still could use name suggestions, however. Please, tell me which of the 3 I found آپ like best for the female.
The novel is about a guy and a girl and the chapters switch back and forth from each of their POVs.
Rundown of what happens: Ever since Josepheenah کہا the words "I wish you'd just die, Eli," she has never stopped regretting them. Jo and Eli really got along until he decided to fall in love with her. Maybe they had loved each other all along, but it had never been کہا so it was never an issue. Eli loved the way the bright blue of her eyes could either pierce یا invite آپ in یا even both at the same time. He loved that reddish mess of hair that she had always hated. Eli found her laughter to be موسیقی to his ears. Her voice was melodic and always on key. Jo always knew what to say to him, until she says the last words Eli ever heard her say. She was confused. He knew she was dating his best friend. She was angry that he would even put her in that position. Yet, Eli would do anything Jo wanted. They were at her house at the time, so when Jo got up to get them a snack, he gave her what she asked for. Jo comes back to her room to find a note. She can't believe what she reads. She climbs over the windowsill after Eli, grabbing his shoe that must have fallen off on the way out. She runs to his house down the street. The door is wide open and his parents are not home. She rushes up the stares to his room but it is too late. On the mirror, painted with his own blood, were the words "I told آپ I would do ANYTHING for you, Jo. I love you.". Most of the time, things like this are permanent. Most of the time, there is no 'undo' button in life, but can life make an exception for these teenagers who were obviously meant to be?
Female تفصیل (Name that I used: Josepheenah/Jo)
Age: 17
Hobbies: anything artsy, making people smile and laugh
پسندیدہ Subject: Art
Seen as the: Optimist, artist
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: She's مزید than just a ball of sunshine, and sometimes, she's unhappy too.
Physical description: short, ginger, long wavy red hair normally pulled into loose pigtails, a bit of freckles around her cheekbones, bright blue eyes, not stick thin but not fat
To see the first chapter, written in the female (temporarily named Josepheenah)'s POV, link.
Male تفصیل (Temporarily named Eli)
Age: 18
Hobbies: Sports - especially baseball, soccer, track
پسندیدہ Subject: Math (and sports, of course)
Seen as the: Jock
Something she would like people to know that they don't seem to get: He's not stupid! He gets straight A's, and he's no where near a jerk. The male temporarily named Eli is the sweetest guy آپ will ever meet. Athletes are not always jerks یا idiots!
Physical description: average height, blonde with a 'Beiber flip' hairstyle, he has a تل, مول below his left eye, orange-ish eyes, light زیتون skin tone, skinny
If there are any سوالات about the characters that I have failed to answer, I'll be happy to answer them. Thanks in advance for any advice! I'd be adding some drawings of the characters to the مضمون soon ;D
This is a story; my story. I am Damien Cole Demidov. My grandparents are full-blooded Russian. I am twenty-one years old, and I’ve been locked up in an asylum for four years.
I have black hair about four inches from my shoulders. I am vampire pale. I have crystal blue eyes. I’m 5’9’’.
I have met many a person in my time. Maybe you’ll meet some of the throughout the story.
Anywho, I live in the U.S. now, shipped over with my mom when I was twelve. I live in New York City at the moment. My mom is back in Russia with my father, and grandparents.
Now, let’s see what’s in store for us.
I have black hair about four inches from my shoulders. I am vampire pale. I have crystal blue eyes. I’m 5’9’’.
I have met many a person in my time. Maybe you’ll meet some of the throughout the story.
Anywho, I live in the U.S. now, shipped over with my mom when I was twelve. I live in New York City at the moment. My mom is back in Russia with my father, and grandparents.
Now, let’s see what’s in store for us.
Here I spread the colors of my life
They sound like a tune of fife
They always closed me in a dark room
I put on my headphones, enjoyed & played the boom
It's so boring to just see the sky
Today I decided I'll go and fly
Eveyones mind is full of depressions
But mine is full of imaginations
I changed the dark night into shining sequins
And the heap into beautiful fragrance
I don't want آپ to make my hair a mess
Cause I'm wearing the tiara to be a princess
My passion, my obsession, my desire
Don't interfere in between یا I'll blow آپ up with flames of fire
They sound like a tune of fife
They always closed me in a dark room
I put on my headphones, enjoyed & played the boom
It's so boring to just see the sky
Today I decided I'll go and fly
Eveyones mind is full of depressions
But mine is full of imaginations
I changed the dark night into shining sequins
And the heap into beautiful fragrance
I don't want آپ to make my hair a mess
Cause I'm wearing the tiara to be a princess
My passion, my obsession, my desire
Don't interfere in between یا I'll blow آپ up with flames of fire