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posted by para-scence
Inspired سے طرف کی the song, "Room of Angels" سے طرف کی Akira Yamaoka on the Silent ہل, لندن 4 soundtrack. ;)

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Worthless. Useless. Despicable. Wretched.

These are the words my mother used to describe me. Each word was like a dagger through me. But I was thankful. She might've come up with that soon enough.

"There's nothing like a mother's love," they say. I wouldn't know. If it included fear, pain, hate, and resentment, then yes. There's nothing like it. Not in the the entire world. But I think they meant it was wonderful. Not terrible.

But it was over now. She was gone forever.

I was allowed to her funeral, but they came with. The people that took me away. They keep me in a room. They say there's something wrong with me.

Because I did it.

I killed my mother. It was easy, really, because I hate her. I sat in the chair, while everyone went up and کہا their goodbye's to my mother, as she laid motionless in the casket at the front of the room. Their faces were soaked with tears. They didn't know her. Even my grandmother. She had no idea what monster she had raised.

Finally, it was my turn to go and see her. The two men that had brought me here walked carefully behind me, arms out to stop me if I "tried anything funny." I went up to the casket, and just stared. She laid there, sleeping eternally. I cocked my head slightly. This is freedom. I was free from her hateful, venom-filled words, her brutal punishments...

I heard the weeping behind me. I wondered what they were thinking of that could make them cry like this. It couldn't be this. This... This should be a celebration... In my opinion. They obviously did not know the same person I did. My eyes were dry, drooped slightly from boredom.

I turned my full focus back to my mother. She's dead. That was for sure. The man that had دیا a speech a while پہلے had کہا something about heaven. I almost wanted to laugh. That was the last place I'd suspect she'd go.

"Goodbye," I کہا nonchalantly. Then I made my way back to my seat, my feet dangling off the edge of the soft chair. I leaned back and sighed. Would this be over yet?

There were hateful glances thrown in my direction. They hated me for this. I didn't care. I did myself a favor. I was free once at last. Now that I think about it, I did her a favor as well. She was also free from me. They despised me for killing her. There was no سوال about it. I was sick of questions. They'd asked me so many, none of which I answered. I was too busy wallowing in relief.

"How could آپ do it?" they asked. "How could you, a nine سال old girl, kill her mother?"

I shrugged, and smiled.

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Sorry, this sucks. XP This song is still stuck in my head, and it gave me a short story idea. :P
We've all been there.

We've all seen it (at least once).

Perhaps even committed the "easy" crime.

You know what I'm talking about.

"His cheeks were red with embarrassment."

"Anna checked the balance sheets again, coming to a conclusion the the financials were a deep crimson."

"I stared into his blue eyes as deep as the ocean."

Colors, like anything else, are powerful descriptive pieces. When used as a comparison یا a contrast, the reader is painted a picture of the person/object's look and the setting as a whole. It should make the scene come together in a seamless flow.

For example, the "red with...
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posted by 7seablue7
 MOONWALKER THE SERIES
MOONWALKER THE SERIES
Episode 1~ We meet again, setting hotel in New york (Hilton) سال 1982. Scean1
---------------------------------------------------------------Micheal: well we're here guys...... guys
hey what are yall lookin at?
Marlon: check out theses girls at the pool over
there... (practically drooling)

Michael : all آپ do is watch girls all the time man.. come on.

Jermaine;yeah marlon( laughing) although they cut
Michael: now آپ too Jermaine( annoyed)

Jermaine:Mic آپ can't lie to your self they look good.
Michael:your right.... they do (sighing) we gotta
hurry up and cheek into our rooms so we can get ready...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter One

Mason Montgomery auditioned 480 girls this week alone to play the part as شارلٹ in his new movie, Hourglass. Hourglass was all about a woman who could stop time just to be with her love. Each girl he auditioned wasn't giving him what he wanted. All he wanted was a fair-looking girl with pretty eyes and a sensitive دل but the girls he auditioned were anything but that. He tried being nice and say encouraging things but after the 248th girl he gave that a rest. Now he just کہا what came to mind like "You stink," یا "And آپ call yourself an actress? Get it outta here." He had...
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posted by Kachetes
“why does she live in this side of town when آپ have a hous- joshua was asking but my glare clearly got to him
“look its not like we dont want her in our house ... She IS married and she didnt want financial help from any one.Lupita is a girl thats loud and proud in a way but Marc is a good guy they're happy I just wish they would...”
I stop we stood in front of a small house and it looked like we missed a good party بیئر cans and bottles al over the front yard,a few dosen پیزا boxes,three dogs eating the leftovers,and one pretty lady passout on the grass;my aunt Lupita
“do I realy need...
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posted by harrypotterbest
Should I continue یا not? [The ones in Italics are the parts I'm unhappy with]

For a vampire – a suspect of being one, really– she seemed pretty... human. With my job as a Vampire Seeker, she wasn’t like any of the other cases of vampires I had discovered. With all the raving stories of vampires I suppose they had to be more... careful with their special diet. But still, a vampire with these little reports, it was... strange, for lack of a better word. Perhaps we just had to get مزید information; yes, that was probably the case.
I sighed and flipped my notebook shut. Putting my pencil...
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posted by mitchie19
6. T H E C R U Z F A M I L Y

“Welcome, Mariah.” Aunt Lourdes’ hugged me while the maids took care of my stuff. “Your house is so big,” I complimented. My eye caught on the beautiful carved statue on the corner and the massive staircase.
I waved my black hair on my right shoulder.
The walls were covered in golden rod پیپر وال with a hint of yellow-green vines as the design. “Are آپ hungry? We’re about to eat lunch,” she looked at me.
I pursed my lips. “Um, yes,” considering the fact that I didn’t eat along the long way, made me hungry as I smelled the scent of the food...
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posted by Caleigh210
The feeling's unusual as I walk around
The sights are as strange as the sound
It's hard to believe that the beauty around me
Isn't beautiful in reality

How would آپ feel if all آپ know's a lie
That the truth is really hard to come by
When you're told that it's all alright
But all آپ see is the darkness of the night

When آپ realize
That the truth and the lies
Are separated سے طرف کی one thin line

Where can I find home
Even though I'm all alone
How can I say the right words
When I can't even دکھائیں the would
Who I am
Why I stand
That I'm completely lost and I can't
Find my way
In this dreadful shade of grey

Hopelessly...
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posted by problematic124
***Please don't copy***
Chapter 6
Death Targets
"From the Predator to the Prey"Aurora questioned reading the note.
As soon as I read this I called them all to my house I also told them about the (bio) dad situation.
"So that's the same the person who turned off the power at Tweety's house" Ariel asked
"Had to be"Fable nodded "who else could it be"
"Should we tell the police"Owen asked
"It's like Gregg کہا we need hard cold facts this can also be counted as a joke"Tweety reminded us
"And it's like the note says he's never been caught before"Gregg told us
"We should fight back"Aurora کہا suddenly
"What!Fight...
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posted by lovepop
Everyone was writing it down on their calenders as alerts of it popped up on the news, internet, and in big bold letters, on a newspaper! The time has come for it to be known to mankind and liked! The movie, Brenda and Luci's Night, was premiering on that weekend, the 25th of November.Everyone wanted to see it! There had been commercials of it since August, and the stars had been anxious. Speaking of the "stars" Whose names were Hillisia Jones, and Ponya Kricketiz. They were bff's since the kindergarten, and now they were in 7th grade. They auditioned for the movie without the other knowing! They were astounded when they learned they were auditioning for the same movie. They were mad, but when Ponya got the letter she was Brenda, and Hillisia was Luci, they were overjoyed, and began screaming with cheers! Now they were in New York being filmed for the movie... wait for more!
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I woke up at 5 AM. Not suprising. I went to the bath room and got ready. I grabbed some clothes and put them on. A white short that کہا "WHO CARES?" and black shorts. I put On knee socks with converse. I put my hair in a bun. I grabbed my backpack and glanced at the clock. 7:45?! Holy crap! I ran to school. When I got there, only 5 منٹ left until class. 7:55. Wow. Arent vampires suspossed to nbe as fast as a bullet? I walked down the hall nervously. Everyone was staring at me. "How's that?" "Who the heck is she?" I wanted to tell the I was Samantha Fitzpatrick of The FitzPatrick Family...
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posted by para-scence
I got, yet another, chance of being adopted when I was fourteen. I was in my room, drawing when there was a soft knock at my door. I looked up to see Ms. Bayer smiling sheepishly. I grimaced. That woman can give children nightmares with that smile.

"Hecate, there's someone here to see you." I cocked my head to the side. The only person I was interested in seeing was Officer Truman, and he always just came to my room. I shook my head and returned to my sketch. "Hecate. Get your butt up and go down to the front ڈیسک this instant!" I sighed and got off the bed, and followed Ms. Bayer down to the...
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posted by para-scence
Along with the excitement of having a baby, I also became very worried. What would happen if I had a seizure during the pregnancy? What if my medication harmed the baby? I went on the computer and began searching for answers. Blake stood behind me, reading over my shoulder.

"It says آپ can continue, یا stop your medication... It's up to آپ and your doctor," he read aloud. I nodded.

"It also says major seizures can be dangerous..." I sighed. He patted my shoulder. "But, if I do take the medication, there's an increased risk of birth defects."

"What are آپ going to do?" he asked. I sighed.

"I...
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posted by para-scence
Hera got out of the hospital a couple days later. Since it'd be too difficult for her to use crutches, because of her broken arm, she got to use a wheelchair. Kara کہا she was terribly depressed now, and blamed herself for her friends' deaths. I visited them often, sometimes with Blake if he wasn't working. It was kind of unnerving to see Hera like that.

She was still bruised and scarred up pretty bad, like she just got out of a brutal fight. The casts and wheelchair made her seem even مزید fragile than she already was, and her stare was blank; out there. She didn't talk much now either. Before,...
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