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I guess with me that day, I should have learned not to expect what was coming. I woke up, my side hurting like hell, but I was better. I was still lying on the stretcher, and the combination of dried blood on it and the smell of the dried blood made me feel the need to vomit. Looking up, I saw white ceiling tiles. I also saw two cold metal objects pushed into either side of my temple: guns.
    I sat up in shock and confusion and was pushed down سے طرف کی two people; one with spiky hair and the other looked like a mouse. Oh yeah, David and Mike. It was all coming back to me: getting shot, the ambulance, the woman, the man, the S.W.A.T. team, Mr. Hanson, the man in a suit. I put a hand on my throbbing head. Random names swirled around in my head. Faintly, I heard people talking.
    “Hello? People? Can I get a chair یا something? This dried blood does not smell good,” I remarked loudly. People always get on to me about how loud I was. A chair screeched and a man stood up. He was the man with the twin. He had a large گلابی scar tracing his left eyebrow, making it look like he had a long, گلابی eyebrow in addition to his regular brown one.
    The man pulled a chair اگلے to the stretcher. Mike slowly lifted me from the stretcher and into the chair; the whole time David pressed the guns into my temple. The man, Tony, I think, pushed me in the chair back to the table. Mike pulled out a gun himself and aimed it towards my head. I was sitting اگلے to the woman, Lori? Tony was sitting on Lori’s left, and the S.W.A.T. man was sitting on Tony’s left. The man in the suit, Vladimir Something, was sitting across from the group, glaring at them with squinty brown eyes.
    I looked closer at Vladimir’s nametag. ‘What a funny name,’ I thought to myself, trying to read his last name. Vladimir Shitface. ‘Even better.’
     “What the hell happened out there?” Vladimir asked, smacking a fist down on the metal table. The group stared dully back at him for a couple of seconds. Finally Lori spoke,
    “I was listening to the dispatcher from my car-,”
    “May I remind you, Lori Vandana, that آپ were suspended from this case until further notice?” Vladimir coldly interrupted.
    “Yes sir I know-,”
    “So what were آپ doing there? آپ screwed up a police investigation!” He smacked his hand against the میز, جدول again.
    “After I was suspended, I got a unanimous call saying that a girl would be shot at Unity Middle School, and that Mike Peachson and David Tosdon would be tending to her wounds. I knew that the two were medical frauds. I didn’t know if the call was legitimate, so I went to Unity to check it out just in case. There was an ایمبولینس there, so I peeked inside, and Mike and David were there. I was going to arrest them when a man showed up, claiming he was police and that I should drop my weapon and give it to him,” Lori reported.
    “You mean Tony Holdom showed up and demanded آپ give your gun to him?” Vladimir questioned.
    “It wasn’t Tony, this man didn’t have Tony’s scar,” Tony winced at the statement, turning his head away in shame. I wondered what happened to him.
    “So what did آپ do with your gun?”
    “I didn’t have it. The band director-,”
    “Mr. Hanson,” I cut it.
    “Mr. Hanson took the gun. آپ see, Mike was running away, and I shot at him because I couldn’t catch him, but I missed. Mr. Hanson took the gun and shot. It hit Mike in the shoulder.” Lori looked away, obviously waiting for Vladimir to explode. He did.
    “You let a civilian handle a gun?!? آپ let him shoot it?!? He shot a man Vandana! You’ll be prosecuted just as must as he will!!” A glob of spit shot out from his mouth and landed on the میز, جدول just in front of me. I snorted and bit my lip. Vladimir looked at me, and my smile instantly vanished. I frowned, thinking about sad things. He turned back to Lori.
    “Shitface,” I muttered under my breath. Vladimir turned back to me.
    “What the hell are آپ whispering about?” He asked. I winced away, an amused look on my face.
    “I don’t know. I’m a hostage.” I was about to add, You’re the shitface, but I held back.
    “Damn you,” I laughed at his remark.
    “Right back at you,” I smartly said.
    “Is this dickhead of a girl on anything?” he gestured towards Mike and David.
    “Probably,” they answered in unison. Vladimir shook his head.
    “What about you?” He nodded at Tony.
    “Well,” Tony began, scratching his head, “I was driving around, getting a burger, when I heard the dispatcher going off for a shooting at Unity-,”
    “And آپ were fired earlier that day?” Tony nodded; Vladimir shook his head like a principal that had just caught his students smoking weed. “Why the hell were آپ in a police car?”
    “I was really hungry, and I figured people wouldn’t get in line if they saw a police officer in front of them,” he quietly replied, and the group snickered quietly while I was shaking with silent laughter. Vladimir glared at me.
    “Anyway, I heard the dispatcher say there was a shooting, so I drove over there, and I saw Lori in the وین and a man talking to her. He was Sean McCane, the escaped convict from ’04, so I was about to arrest him but he took off running. Mr. Hansin-,”
    “Hanson,” I interjected again.
    “Mr. Hanson shoot him to the ground with Lori’s gun-,”
    “He shoot two people?!?” I was sure Vladimir was about to stroke.
    “I walked over to Sean, and I arrested him. I walked him back to the ambulance, ‘cause he was shot, when the fucking S.W.A.T. team arrived,” Tony glared at the third man. “They jump out and Mr. Nick Peterson is leading the group of S.W.A.T. that tackled me instead of Sean McCane, the escaped convict!” He glared at Nick.
    “You guys look so alike! How could we tell the difference?” Nick demanded.
    “We tried to tell آپ guys!” Lori muttered. “But no! Somehow the convict arrests the police officer. And I’m living in Candyland,” she shook her head.
    “Well sorry!” Nick angrily said, folding his arms over his chest.
    “Sorry’s not good enough! آپ let an escaped convict get away in a S.W.A.T. truck! He could be anywhere! Good job,” Tony sighed.
    “You all are a load of digraces. Peterson, why did آپ come to Unity?” Vladimir calmly asked; his blood pressure probably lowered.
    “I got a call that Sean McCane was at Unity, so I called in for a team,” Peterson levely replied.
    “Who did آپ get the call from?”
    “I gave it. I saw Sean and called in for reinforcements. I didn’t expect to get a truckload of idiots,” Tony had also crossed his hands over his chest.
    There was silence; Tony and Nick were glaring at each other. Mike and David were pressing guns into my head, Lori was picking at her cuticles, and Vladimir was thinking hard. I looked at his nametag; it کہا Shiptace, not Shitface. I had a feeling of remorse, but it quickly passed.
    “Mike Peachson, David Tosdon, do آپ know anything about Sean McCane?” Vladimir asked.
    “Who do آپ think was driving the ambulance?” Mike replied a thin, strained smile on his face.
    “Would آپ be willing to work with the FBI, S.W.A.T. team, and the police? We could give آپ money in exchange for the girl and some information.” Vladimir bargained.
    “Money for the information یا the girl, not both, your decision.” The group looked at me. Vladimir studied me, thinking to see if I was worth finding an escaped convict.
    “I’ll die,” I offered, and the people gaped at me. “I was kind of suicidal anyway,” They still gaped at me. I blushed. “As long as I can work on the case with them,” I quickly added.
    “Fine,” Vladimir said, but I suspected he had a plan of his own. “Lori Vandana, Tony Holdom, Nick Peterson, Mike Peachson, David Tosdon, and,” he waited for my name.
    “Jude Ashley Hosy,” I lied; my real name was Miranda Davidston.
    “And Jude Ashley Hosy, آپ all are assigned the task of finding and arresting Sean McCane.” With that Vladimir walked out of the room, leaving us in silence.
    “So a police officer with identity theft, a S.W.A.T officer with temper issues, a sassy FBI agent, the Brothers Grimm, and a suicidal girl sent on a task to find an insane escaped convict, fun.” I stated as I propped my feet up on the metal table.
posted by babina
hey! everyone who is kind enough to read my story! this is my first time so please تبصرہ and tell what آپ think about it.thank u! hope آپ like it!

I was walking down the hallway, going to my third class and grateful for all the posters they had put up for the upcoming dance because now no one noticed me as i sneaked through the kids in the hall to my class. Usually i and a few other kids,"the outsiders" they called us, were the aim of all the bulling which was so bad this سال because of the new gang in the school"the Qsix". The school was bad enough without them, but when they came things...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
DEAD & DARKLY
A LILLY BARKLY NOVEL!
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CHAPTER ONE...
I walked into my room, and fell onto my bed. My face was covered with sweat, and I was pooped! The clothes that are on me now are clinging to my body. It disgusts me, but that's what آپ get when آپ work at a bar and grill. I'm the cook at the bar and grill I work at.
It's called Laffyette's Bar & Grill. But that doesn't matter right now! What does, is how bad I look and smell. I got up, took the clip out of my hair, and grabbed a tank سب, سب سے اوپر and some shorts. I went into the bathroom and...
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posted by dragonrider
I storm out of the classroom quickly and plop myself at the couple of feet away from the class room.
I shouldn't let my temper get the best of me. I almost exposed myself to those fools. It's a good thing that I کہا probably in those sentences. I should be careful on what I say in there.
I hear a footstep and look up to see one of the most annoying human being on the planet Elliot. I glare and put my head down.
Elliot sits down across from me. His pale hands reach for my hands.
"Hey Starr what are doing out here?" he asks in his nosey way
I look up and stare and his pimple covered pale white...
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posted by TDIlover226
part 2
Eddie walked to school, he didn't feal like going though, he was still mad about what Vincent did. He didn't see Vincent in the lunch room, he just sat there, spaced out in his own world. "Dude, dude, what the heck is wrong with you!" Eddie went out of his little trance to find his friend, Tyler Simmons poking him in the head with a spork. "Nothing's wrong, Tyler" کہا Eddie, "I just have alot on my mind". "What's up then?" asked Tyler. "You'd never beleive me!". "what is it!".
Eddie told Tyler what had happened the night before, sparing no details. "well, I'll tell آپ what happened to...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I looked up now. “What did آپ say?” I asked. He opened his mouth to form the same words but I stopped him. “Oh god” I said, he laughed. “Yeah, that wasn’t what I was hoping for” he said. I didn’t smile. “You can’t” I said, he rolled his eyes. “But I do” he answered me. I then let go of his chest. “Ethan” I said, he came closer. “I know آپ have strong feelings for him” he said. I nodded. “And I know آپ don’t have those same feelings” he said, I nodded. I turned away. “I need to go” I said.

If I could run faster in this cold I would. I walked as fast...
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I stopped in place, there he was, my dream guy just standing meters away. He doesn't know my name, he doesn't know I exist but I couldn't help myself. I started آگے my eyes locked on him. We were a metre apart when suddenly he was gone. He just disappeared leaving a puddle of dust. I couldn't believe it we were so close to being together and then right before my eyes he vanished into a puddle. I covered the remaining metre and bent down. Slowly I reached out, my hand brushed the dust lightly. It was so soft and smooth, like the beautiful sand on a clear beach.
I was mesmerized سے طرف کی it. It...
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posted by CheeryDavis
Death? a 5 letter word with so much meaning and so much finality! there is nothing good about death so many have gone before there time, so many die with there whole lives ahead of them. death to me is like a theif in the night. they take what they want and then when morning comes ur left to deal with the repercuussions. thats a lot like death people die and are taken away so suddenly and u r the one left to deal with it all, with ur grief and ur lonliness. the feeling of loss, devestation, and overwhelming sadness. Ur left to try to make since of ur world. i think when people die that's when...
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posted by Chandlerfan
I گیا کیا پوسٹ this in the House MD Fanfiction spot, and it was quite well received, so I thought I'd post it here too. Any comments/criticisms are welcome.
I hope آپ like it!



A lonely man sits at home; long, gracious fingers teasing beautiful موسیقی out of a piano. The piano knows what no one else knows: his feelings which the piano lets loose every time he plays, yet failing to let anyone know about them; موسیقی without lyrics.

A lonely woman sits in a cafe, nursing a hot cup of coffee, as if she were looking deep into its soul and letting her feelings flow from her to the coffee; she could trust...
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posted by jarik
Here's some advice for all آپ budding poets out there. Start a poetry journal and start writing a poem everyday.

To get started all آپ need is a notebook and a pencil. Everytime you're inspired سے طرف کی something you've experienced write it down while it's still fresh in your mind.

You'll find that a lot of what you've written is rubbish but that does not matter. What matter is you're getting into the habit of writing on a regular basis and سے طرف کی doing that your skills as a poet will improve with the practice آپ will get سے طرف کی keeping a poetry journal.
posted by rpattz_21
Teary-eyed I stared at his angelic face
A dream this can only be.
For I lost him year's before.
But here he stands gently smiling.
I lay a hand to my دل to steady it.
Trying to clear my mind I close my eyes,
And slowly chant only a dream...
Something touched my face lightly.
Opening fast my eyes find his hand.
My hand ever so quickly goes to
his, and feels his hot skin under mine.
I started to speak but his fingers came over my mouth.
I smell that soft smell
that could only belong to him.
As I started grasping the idea of him
being real, he suddenly disappears.
My eyes quickly open with tears falling fast.
It was only a dream..........
Just an interesting look at different writing methods.
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monty ازگر
john cleese
michael palin
eric idle
I woke up that morning exhausted and numb. I had no idea where I was, and for a تقسیم, الگ کریں سیکنڈ I panicked. Then, like floodgates opening, it all came back. The hurt, the tears, the anger; my newest scar. Suddenly I had an idea. What if this was all just a terrible nightmare? What if Lyn was waiting for me in the باورچی خانے, باورچی خانہ like always? I hurried out of bad, pausing to only make sure I was decent for my cousins. I stepped out of the room onto the cold tile. The house had an eerie morning silence, so with every step I took I hesitated. I hadn't prayed in a long time but I did then. "Please, pretty...
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posted by Emoshinell
Here is a poem I wrote about the boy I love. It doesn't rhyme but it doesn't have to to be a poem. Send یا تبصرہ feedback.
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To me, Will is مزید than a name. This is what it means to me:

W is for the softest whisper in the sweetest breeze of spring.

I is for the icy chill that goes down my spine when آپ spare me a small glance my way.

L is for the look my penetrating eyes give آپ when آپ turn away from me; when I want most for آپ to stay close to me.

And L is for the unconditional and irrevocable and irrational love I feel for your soul.

Without you, my دل is silent. آپ arethe only one who has touched my دل and it will always be yours. آپ are my only love. I've left my دل with you; look over it closely. It's your only responsibilty. Protect it from all harm. آپ are the only one who who ever has and ever will touch my soul. And it too is yours.
posted by gossipgirlxoxo
“Hey” Ethan greeted me and nodded and smiled as much as I didn’t want to get into the whole boy اگلے door thing, he had a hot body that آپ could see through his tight shirt, and his brown hair matched his dark brown eyes. “Hey, where’s Thor?” I asked as I walked across the باورچی خانے, باورچی خانہ floor and sat myself down across from him his dark brown eye’s still no me. “Getting ready, we’re going to a club tonight” he said, still eating his کیلا and watching me.”It’s 4 o’clock” I کہا raising my eye brow. We’re going somewhere else first, I would tell آپ but I’m afraid...
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posted by Spotty_Vision21
This book is a vampire novel. Simple fact is I disliked Twilight so much I decided to write a half-decent vampire novel. So here is chapter 1
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Eve looked back at her wings. They were magnificent, pure white and shining. They stretched out about 20 feet. Grinning, she gave herself a running start and launched into the air. Momentarily just enjoying the rush, she opened her eyes and gasped. Everything looked so small! The river gracefully curved on for miles. Letting out a small giggle Eve dived. Now she could make out a few faces. Her mother, Janet, waved from the لائبریری where she worked....
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