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During state testing week, I had only one دن where I saw all of my students. I had my students write a story and several of them کہا they didn’t know what to write. This student found a solution to her problem. I keep telling students if they can't think of anything then they just need to write whatever pops into their heads The following is printed with Chey’s permission. She did write a proper story after this.

I can’t find anything to write sitting in my mom’s car, where my bag was. I’m trying to figure out something to write and maybe after my little sister and older sister are done fighting, we can leave for school. But, I also have nothing to write. Wait, do آپ hear that? Yea, that nothing? They’ve stopped fighting. Awesome! I wonder if we could leave? I’m ready, Chantel’s ready, Kai’s ready. Is Manny ready? Wow, I should scratch out that baby talk but I have nothing to write about, and I need at least 650 words. But, I have nothing to write about.

Oh, there goes my aunt and my cousins. “Bye.” I’ll be back I have to fix something. I’m back baby. Wow sitting here with paper in my hand just sitting in a car trying to find something to write, and now I just wrote allover my arm. Oops!

Wow my sisters are going to be late. It’s not my fault. I’m ready. I’m already in the car so now what? I have nothing to write and my hair is messy and we’re going to be late. Cool! Oh crasp! We have to do that FCAT thing and I forgot all about that, Oh and we’re getting رپورٹ cards. Oh my gooooodness. I’m going to die. Oh no, I hear someone coming. Oh no! Never mind. Ewww, I hate آپ people. The people that live اگلے to us. I mean in front. They are leaving. Gone. Now I can do something. I realize when I wrote that I thought I would have to go. Oh well. Everyone is in the car now, screaming, yelling, so blah. I live with screaming and yelling all the time. Help me!

Driving to my older sister’s bus stop in peace. Finally. Wait, never mind. Well she’s gone. I live with so many people it’s crazy. I live with seven girls and they have big mouths. It is really getting old. But, enough about that. I still have nothing to write about. 000-000-0000. Mommy’s on the phone with Gammies, my granda. She lives far, far away. I miss you. Bye, love ya.

آگ کے, آگ station 4 has just been passed سے طرف کی a white van. I mean an ugly white van.I’m sorry for this dumb story. I’ve just gotta get this finished. Plus, I’ve got nothing to write about.
Hah! Now mom is trying to give us the “respect” talk. Booo. Help me again.
“Chey, daddy says he loves you”, کہا Kai.
“I love آپ too daddy. I said”
I کہا that سے طرف کی Wakeland where my sister goes to school.

“Go mom”. The light turns green and she finally goes. We pulled in to my sister’s school.. Wow I see my old school, weird. I see these little kids with their backpacks so big and them so small. Ha, ha. Well bye old school. Coming to the light here and we have to turn right, go straight, curvy, school 20. My mom slows down. The lady waves and mom waves back, then turns into the school.
I’ll be back. I’m back. I’m in the gym listening to موسیقی so bored here.

I’ve read this all. It doesn’t make any sense. Sorry, I’ve wasted your time teacher but, I have nothing to write about
The city of light was full of marchants and villagers. Elyon stood and gazed at them from the huge silver gate. And gurding the gate was two broad shouldered men, wearing bright white robes, that glowed from every angle.
"Excuse me?" the man with blonde hair asked. When Elyon took a shaky step forward, the men stared shocked at her.
"Elyon? What are آپ doing outside the city?" The man asked. Elyon took in a deep sharp breath and took another shaky step forward. She still hadnt noticed that the vilagers were watching silently.
"Elyon...my name is..?she smiled and fell into the darknes, fainted. The two gaurds rushed to her aid, and the vilagers erupted into a panicky uproar
"Quick take her to Lady Alexsis!" the man with darker ahir nodded, picked up Elyon and disapered.
"Leo? What the hell is going on? This is a bad sign," an old man closest to the alone guard asked.
"I dont know," he muttered looking up at the قلعہ of light, "i really dont know,".

تبصرے PLZ
posted by bri-marie
Note: I'm not sure how much I like the names I gave my characters. I may changed them in later parts.
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A small, silver picture frame sat alone on a nightstand. The picture held inside it, yellowed and dusty with age, showed three small children – two boys and one girl, all about six years old – with their arms wrapped around each others shoulders. They were standing in front of a large oak درخت and the shadows had made the pictures unreal; the girl's hair was shown to be brown and the boys...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
“    the new beginning ”

As days passed it got worse. I couldn't take it anymore, we were growing apart, barely even talking.
Anything I talked about doing, Edward would disagree یا say its not safe.
Once, I was going to the toilet and Edward asked Alice to go with me!. To the toilet!
That led to a دن of me ignoring him. That taught him a lesson to shut his mouth and stop making decision for me…..well for about 24 hours. Then it starts again.
“Bells….your getting so boring! Talk a little…oh! I have a better idea lets play” Emmett grinned.
“Emmett, cant آپ see...
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posted by HarryPLover
The pain آپ caused isn't what scarred me
The burning tears آپ left me to shed isn't what burned me
Your last words aren't what hindered me
It was the Legend.

That endless struggle to win
To fight back
To not toss and turn in my bed
That secure feeling I had before you
To feel as a sharp as a pencil lead
Now that loneliness I feel without you
A constant reminder

Feeling my دل beat again
Done with the breathtaking moments
And the heart-skipping kisses
To breathe again
Over and Done with

It wasn't those tears
It wasn't those words
It wasn't all that pain آپ left me to bare.

It wasn't the legend آپ were when آپ were here
But the legacy in my دل that آپ left!
posted by StarWarsFan7
There I was. *sigh* Just sitting there, waiting for him. Who? آپ ask? My crush, Patrick Wellsiben, he was the one for me. Let alone, him being THE most مقبول boy in school, I was known as a loser. I was the omega of the بھیڑیا pack. What am I talking about? Nevermind. My conscience says "Ask him out!", but my guts say "Don't do it you! He's gonna say no!" I don't know what to do! He comes near me and says "Hey." I stand there like a scarecrow smiling. "I feel stupid." "So stupid." Why shouldn't I get the attention from populars? I have short, thick black hair, I wear tank tops all the time, regular jeans and converse. So much for fitting in.
posted by bri-marie
Micheal Ryder swerved sharply to the left, almost missing the small driveway he was supposed to be turning into. He winced as his pickup truck made the rough transition between concrete and gravel. It was something he was going to have to get used to – he'd be driving down this path every دن for who knew how long. A particularly large rock dislodged him from his seat, and he let out a foul explicative as his blond head bashed against the ceiling of the cab. Cursing his father, and the owners of the house he was renting, he slammed the truck to a stop. Not caring that he was still yards away...
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posted by grissomsgirl
Please read Parts 1&2 یا this won't make any sense.
This isn't a timeline story Gilbert is three and this is my first try at fanfiction, so please be gentle!

All CSI characters owned سے طرف کی CBS except for Grissom Junior, he's mine, I hope!

I have no idea what went on after I met the rest of my family but I understood some of it, something about going ہوم a week off and Stevie, Daddy does not look too well so I asked him who Stevie is whilst I sat on Grampa Jim’s lap “Gilbert, Stevie is my tarantula کی, ترانٹولا and he lives in a tank in my office” کہا Daddy “what’s a tarantula کی, ترانٹولا Daddy?” Daddy...
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posted by bri-marie
Warning: Abuse
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Picking up a stick, I struck it across old Emily Simpson’s white picket fence. The noise was sharp and loud and would most likely be heard. Smirking, I kept walking, trailing the stick along behind me. A low growl sounded and I turned my head. Sure enough, a huge, brown and white mutt crawled out of the dog house, bearing his teeth and snarling. I tossed the stick to my left, away from the fence, and turned away into the street.

The weather was nice – warm and sunny, with just...
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posted by HarryPLover
"Ms.Love!"
I banged my head against the ڈیسک when my science teacher, Mr.Underwood woke me up from my sleep with his slave owner voice.
"Do آپ care to شامل میں us?" I personally didn't really feel like it but then again I wasn't in the mood to argue.
"Sure." I yawned. He went on teaching his boring lesson on frogs. As if we need to know about frogs. What career requires آپ to have frog knowledge as one of your skills?
The گھنٹی, بیل rang louder and longer than usual. Lucky for me that was my last period.
Usually Matt is waiting سے طرف کی the car سے طرف کی the time I come out سے طرف کی this time he wasn't there. His car was...
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posted by NoahxCourtney77
It's Funny, I Use To Be Popular. At First Some People Loved Me And Others Hated Me. Now Everyone Hates Me. Even My Old Best Friends. آپ See, I Always Found A Flaw In Everyone And Used It To Hurt Them. Not Physicly Hurt. I Made Them Feel Horrible About Them Selves. I Was The Reason آپ Cried On The Way Home. The Reason آپ Fake Sicked. Of Course Karma Came And Hit Me Like A Ton Of Bricks. I Try Hard To Be Nice, But No One At School Pays Attention To Me. Except Teachers. I Even Tried Sitting With My Old Friends.
"Hey, Guys!" I Said
"What Are آپ Doing Here?" کہا Lexi Illing
"I Just Wanted To Sit With You."
"Well, Their's No Room"
"Yeah, Right There." I کہا Pointing To The Empty Chair At The End.
"Well," کہا Victoria Khan Placing Her کتابیں On The Seat. "Now It's Taken."
Everyone Laughed. Except Me Of Course. I Just Walked Away. Wishing, I Had Never Been So Cruel.
posted by HarryPLover
We were walking through the mall almost about maybe, 20 feet from the door. He hadn't کہا a word to me since the whole Jose thing half an گھنٹہ ago. Matthew was purposely walking behind me, though only a few feet away, still I wanted him at my side. I stopped and looked back at him. He was stopped his walk with his head down. I walked over to the side of him. I reached for his hand that was poking out if his pocket. Then he did the most crazy thing I think Ive ever seen. He actually stepped back so i wouldn't touch him. He seemed to think it was funny, یا maybe it was my startled face that...
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posted by HarryPLover
 Those words pierced me like thorns on a rose.
Those words pierced me like thorns on a rose.
"Happy Anniversary." His smile was absolutely priceless. I had to laugh just a little at his nervous grin. I knew the that it had been a ماہ since we had gotten together but I don't think he exactly remembers whether that دن was today....or yesterday. I wanted to make me sweat it out. But he was right, it was today. I gotta admit that I was kinda surprised that he even remembered.
"Aww, آپ remembered." I saw the nervous grin turn to relief. He earned a kiss.
"Of, course I remembered." I still wanted to make him sweat though. I couldn't resist.
"What happened to the whole " I don't remember...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
*New character! Kayla Known as Karleigh's cousin*

I turned around and saw Nick waving from outfront. Oh, okay. I grabbed two water bottles, one for me and one for Nick. I picked up my phone to take with me.

(Kayla-underlined karleigh- italics)

so wen u getting here?

Uh...not for another گھنٹہ یا so y?

bcuz i was gonna play frisbee with Bri Nick nd others

UGH! Nick! I h8 him!

I don't get it y? y do u h8 him?

cause he pulled my hair in the pool!

I thought we cleared this up...he thought u were his annoying loser sister, Leigha!

ugh! his sister is too cute to h8 nd just cause u like nick...
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posted by CullenProperty
He made me stay in the car while he checked us into the room. I had barely noticed that he carried in two packs of بیئر with us. We started off just watching ویژن ٹیلی and sucking on a beer. Then soon enough he had too many drinks and he started kissing my face. The bad thing is, is that I let him and I kissed him back. He touched me to, but again, I let him and then he pulled my شرٹ, قمیض off. I didn't mind it much until then and that's when I knew that this wasn't the best choice I'd ever made. The smell of his breath penetrated my neck and filtered in through my nose, making my stomach wrench....
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posted by jacob_lover5253
After Nick cheered me up I decided to go home. "I'm gonna head home. I'll text آپ when i'm coming back out. I have to eat dinner." He frowned. "Alright i'll be waiting." I laughed. "Bye." I walked my bike back to my trailer. My friend Briana came running up to me.

"So, I have a question?" I looked at her. "Alright ask away." She smiled a little and let out a little laugh. "Who do آپ like?" I stopped walking all together. She asks me now? "Uh, come to my trailer with me and i'll tell you." I کہا walking again. I walked inside with her following me. Cocoa, my puppy, jumped up on Briana, "Alright...
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posted by dexisawesome
A lesson learned

Once upon a time in the small town of Eighdensburgh there were 6 small children. 5 of the children loved to play all دن and sleep all night. The sixth one did not like what the other kids liked, he liked chemistry and science plus a little bit of paranormal things. One دن the first child, that was a girl, came up and asked the sixth child if he wanted to play. He said” No, of course not! Why would I want to spend all my time prancing around like a fool!”. the first child then said” What’s your problem, آپ got something against us!”. then the first child ran off...
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posted by AliceKinsley
“Lev, آپ left your book on the table.” Boris rushed over to me, handing me my English textbook. I grabbed it reluctantly, sighing. I meant to leave it there. English isn’t my strongest subject. یا Language.
“No, I meant to leave book there.” I replied, rolling my eyes and shoving the textbook into my satchel. Boris chuckled and patted my shoulder. America was such a strange country. The language was hard, the people were different, and the weather was unpredictable. At least in Russia آپ could understand what the people were saying, and when it was going to snow یا shine. “Why...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 learing to let go is like jumping out of an airplan with no para shoot
learing to let go is like jumping out of an airplan with no para shoot
8:00 am Saturday
I woke up, I felt way better then I had in years. I love the ending of my dream, I could still fill the warmth of Alec's arms. I smiled to myself as I made Breakfast for Aunt Maggie and me. I made pancakes, Bacon, and eggs, Aunt Maggie walked down stairs and smiled at me. "what's gotten in to you?" I smiled, thinking of what Alec said. Aunt Maggie looked at me, and کہا "alright who's the boy?"

I pretended like I was offended, "boy, what boy?" Aunt Maggie laughed, "do I get to meet him?" I smiled, "You may? it depends." I stopped talking then, When I'm with Alec I fill so alive,...
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posted by juicyjossy9
Did God Create Evil?

The یونیورسٹی professor challenged his students with this question:

"Did God create everything that exists?"

A student bravely replied, "Yes, he did!"

"God created everything?" The professor asked.

"Yes sir", the student replied.

The professor answered, "If God created everything, then God created evil, since evil exists, and according to the principal that our works define who we are, then God is evil".

The student became quiet before such an answer.
The professor, quite pleased with himself, boasted to the students that he had proven once مزید that the Christian faith was a...
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John Muir Middle School

Alexa Lightman: a girl with braces who wants to make a difference. Age 11
Deandra Cody: a formerly chubby Hispanic girl who loves drawing. Age 12
Katie Eckert: a pigtailed باسکٹ, باسکٹ بال player who wants to be سٹار, ستارہ forward. Age 12
Emma Walsh: a young brunette girl who plays soccer to win. Age 13
Colleen Tepper: a blonde girl who strives to be a champion figure skater. Age 13
Hannah Slater: a girl with curly brown hair who is a violin prodigy. Age 14
Brooke Paxton: a Hispanic girl who play guitar. Age 11
Brigit Banks: a bun wearing blonde Irish dancer who is very serious and competitive....
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