Writing Article: Everything fades to gray/ The Death of our love

Everything fades to gray/ The Death of our love

posted by Princess-Flora

this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good یا not before I کرائیں جمع it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear love آپ once were a shining ray.
In my eyes آپ meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about آپ is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your love is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our love is coming to its new close.
Colors were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would love to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our love has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our love left it took آپ along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying love was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me love would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy

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Character Names!!!!

posted by breebree446

To think, most of my character names come from a thrift store baby book!

Baby Name Books!

My #1 resource is the baby name book I bought from a thrift store. It's a lifesaver! Not only does it have over 5,000 names but origins, boy and girl names, and alternate spelling. But, if آپ can't get a hold of a baby name book there's always...

Name Websites!

Just as good and pretty much the same thing. They have access to millions of names online! One website I find really useful;

link
link - Thanks ellie_bellie135^^

Symbolic Names!

Often, writers give thier characters a name that has a certain meaning. For instance, one of my characters is named Roni. Which is short for Veronica....

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Dogs

posted by Spotty_Vision21

I shouldn’t have shot the dog. I definitely shouldn’t have shot the dog. Even if he did chew upon my prized drumsticks, and feast upon my freshly-baked brownies. The little white-and-brown terror, Mickey, belonged to my neighbor. My neighbor, an 87-year-old chain-smoker named Mary, rarely left the confines of her living room. She sat, دن in and دن out, as her precious mutts wreaked havoc about the neighborhood.
You can see it! My house, the little beasts have chewed upon everything their gnashing, tiny, sharp little teeth could find. I did my best to keep them out, but the little bastards...

Too Soon For The End (4)

posted by fanfangirlfan

As I try to think of something, anything to say to him now, I recall the first time I saw Sam outside of school.
It was about a سال ago. Tyler was at my house playing with Jen. It was late and they both needed to be put to bed. Their tiredness only resulted in them fighting. I eventually put them on time-outs until Tyler’s uncle showed up. یا I thought it would be his uncle. It turned out to be Sam. I opened the door when he knocked and was a little thrown to see him. I recognized him from school, but only as the quiet boy I’d never talked to. His hair was wet as if he’d just showered...

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Teens of Warfare

posted by Hades332

SURGE

Surge, a moderately tall teenager wearing an open red shirt, stood in the middle of what was once New York’s Time Square. At first, second, and possibly even third glance Surge did not look like the kind آپ would want to have a conversation with. He had a strange looking tattoo that adorned his chest like a necklace. His muscles were toned, and his hair was an unkempt blonde. None of this was what would have frightened someone though. What frightened people were the claws strapped to his wrists. They came to sharp, slightly curved, points that dripped with blood.
Surge stood now amongst...

Coach

posted by StarsGoBlue

Coach

Chapter 1: From a میز, جدول Away

Kids, آپ know your Uncle Barney; Scotch, money and women. Those three words pretty much summed up his life. He couldn't ask for a better life. Little did he know, he was about to get a rude awakening. آپ see, he had grown accustomed to this cycle, a carousel, if آپ will. It spun round and round until his life was completely changed by..."The Coach".

An unforgiving canopy of charcoal clouds hung above New York. They seemed detrimental; yearning to release their stockhold of transparent liquid. Rain. That's all it had done for the past week, rain. It...

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Bacterial Contamination

posted by DxCFan123

"Loser!"
"Bitch!"
"Stupid!"

The 5 girls just kept on yelling insults at Miku.

"Go die in a hole!"
"Ugly whore!"
"Idiot!"

The green-haired girl just stood there, head in her hands, listening to their insults.

"Shut up, shut up, shut up!!" she yelled at them, and dropped to her knees, sobbing.

"We'll shut up when آپ stop being an ugly whore!" the head of the clique, named Lily, yelled back. She laughed and high-fived the girls behind her, knowing she was successful in torturing Miku with words. "Gimme the baseball bat Len has, Luka!" Lily کہا to the pink-haired girl that was uncontrollably laughing....

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My Gift

posted by Kachetes

Rain pour hard outside the sound made me want to stay in بستر hmmm I turn to my side and moan
“mom,daaaaaad”my eye start to water my body gave a little shake as if I was cold when I was pretty sweaty with my four blankets on me
“what ?”dad yelled mom turned on the light she rushed to put her hand on my cheek
“whats wrong?"her tone was tired I almost felt bad for waking her up but
“mom I feel sick”my voice sounded just right weak and paimed
“hmmm”after an گھنٹہ of nonstop سوالات and acting on my part mom let me in peace
“we`ll be at work while jr. is going to be at school and...

New story ^^ can آپ help me with the title?

posted by Angelcatz11

Unexpectedly Jada Larkson found herself on the floor sprawled out like someone who just got shot. She tiredly looked around and sighed. She moved to the side and got up.
she then walked over to her dresser and took out her messy pigtails, then her hair was worse, It stuck out in all directions. She grabbed a brush and moved it through her
silky black curls. She tiredly grabbed her classes and stuck them on her pale freckled face. Then she opened her draw and grabed something random. once she was dressed she
noticed the time 7:55 AM...She slept through the first hour-AGIAN
She quickly put toghter...

cold blooded part1 in the beginning

posted by emoarrow

I remember the دن of September “Mommy Daddy” when my mom and dad and I were walking in a pitch-black dark hallway. I heard screams, crying, shouts my Mom told me there are things in this world we wont understand. She was right I had no clue what was going on here only god did.

My Dad took off his locket that my Mom gave to him he placed it around my neck and let go I felt the cold golden chain around my neck I looked down. At the golden and silver locket I gently held the locket in my hand I pressed a button and it opened up. There I saw a picture of my Mom on the left side and a picture...

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Time's Up...

posted by Buddy8fnj

I looked at my watch, two hours left. The whispers in my head gradually getting louder...I had to get there, I had to try. I walked آگے into the shack and was immediatly terrified, written in blood all over the walls was "Time's almost up" over and over again, the whispers in my head starting to get louder, and there was a soft humming sound behind it all. I screamed out in confusion, overwhelmed. Then one whisper in my head was finally distinctable, it whispered "don't even try, fool" I tried to ignore it, and looked around the shack for some way, any way to get to get rid of my burden....

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I have no idea (still lol)

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

So this is part 2 i hope آپ enjoy!

Alexis sat on the گھاس chewing happily on her sandwich, listening to the chatter that was going on around her. Elyon was kneeling not far from her laughing at one of Astrids crude jokes (again), Lily was talking to Rose about some boy in the class above them.Alexis's mind wandered to the time when she was able to talk to the girls and have fun. Like a normall teenager. She closed her eyes, breifly, letting the memories of her past overflow.

A group od girls sat on a large bed, in a large room. Laughing and gossiping. Alexis was there laughing too.The image...

love is a legend

posted by mona_me

what a stupid! love! love! love! "i love love" "everybody needs to be a lover" "true love" all those stupid words! "bla bla bla"
love is a legend, there's nothing u can call it "love" , آپ can't even define it. آپ know why? because it isn't there! that's why آپ can't say i am in love and say the same word after two years یا two days.
آپ see, if it worked with your lover, آپ 'll say آپ loved each other, and if it didn't work, you'll say it wasn't love!!!
آپ are all stupid, lovers!
آپ aren't even "lovers"
because "lovers" is a word from "love" and love's a legend.
when i heard this once when i was young, i didn't believe it.
but know i believe it's the truth, and there's nothing else truth.
آپ may not believe me now, but آپ will, in few years in your life.
love is a legend.

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An Unforgetable Place-Part 2

posted by rAsberrStrarS

Taylors strong and muscular tonned shape made him an ultimate سٹار, ستارہ in his football career.So it was'nt a suprise that i was craddled to that chest know,as he examined me.
'Taylor,seriously i really don't know how i fell, i must have caught my foot on a loose root یا something.you know what i'm like'I spoke as softly as i could with my injuries.
Taylor did know what i was like,most definetly, thats how we met-with me being accident prone.It had been a close call,the first دن of school. When Taylor caught me before i tumbled my way down the first hundred steps of our school, outside reception....

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Love Kills chapter 11

posted by hannah_vampire

Thanks for all the تبصرے plz keep commenting :) this is a long one

I had not been to school for two weeks, had not seen Damon and his family for ages, It was like a prison here and i couldn't get out سے طرف کی myself it was always Sefo follow her studpie mutt.

The whole دن I was followed سے طرف کی 9.00pm ' ارے i'm kinda tried so I'm gonna go to ur bed' OMG would Oni ever get his son away from me ' Sefo Im getting changed unless آپ wanna stay and get hit the the head i suggest آپ leave' He turned and walked out thank goddness, Now Time to go out the window. I got out of the window and started to run Damon...

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Heartbreak

posted by thirteen_times

There he is just standing there, starring at آپ with کتے dog eyes. He smiles briefly at آپ breaking your heart. It’s all too much so آپ so آپ slam the door. Before the door shuts he sticks his foot in the door way stopping it.
“I just want to talk.”
“There’s nothing to talk about.” آپ lie. آپ don’t want to hear him apologize یا even see him. What he did hurt آپ like nothing else could, still آپ knew that آپ loved him and آپ دل ached for him. آپ wish آپ could turn back time to when آپ both were happy but آپ know that what’s done is done.
“How about us…”...

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Gods: Chapter 8: Games

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

At lunch I went over and sat اگلے to Liz, she looked up at me and smiled. “So, you’re talking to me” I said, I opened my can and took a sip out. “Yeah, I forgive you” she said, and then she turned and looked at Adam. “Is that why?” I کہا nodding at Adam. She smiled at me, and giggled. “He’s happy” The word shocked me as they came out of her mouth; I had forgotten that Adam was as Liz tells me ‘unhappy’. I gave her a light smile, I had made him happy. When the گھنٹی, بیل went it frightened me I was too lost in my thoughts to even care about being late, so for a while I just...

Writing

added by ZekiYuro

Sleepless

posted by GoRgOnxx

TIP-TAP-TIP-TAP....,thunder,car horns...All those noisy sounds were vanishing away from my earshot as i entered the dark valley full of garbage and drain pipes.The smell was unbearable.My running shoes made slippery sounds and I was soaking wet in the rain.I was wearing a black shirt,and jeans with my پسندیدہ جیکٹ and stopped only to spare a سیکنڈ to catch my breath.But there was no time to waste.I always wanted this job,it was my dream since i was a child and i couldn't mess it up!But all my hope,courage and the little confident i had left me when i saw what's in front of me.There was...

SOUL Experiment #0012 Chapter 6

posted by Skitty_Love

I awoke in a sprawl. My بستر sheets were tangled around my ankles, my بستر spread tumbled on the floor. "Whoops, I must've had a rough dream last night.." I jumped down and began fixing everything. Just then, Professor Rhinestone walked in. "Oh! Pardon me Soul, I was just searching for one of your old ROMs from long ago." He کہا as he started looking through my maple-wood drawers and shelves. "Thats alright! But- Why would آپ need my old ROMs? I thought I got new ones." He nodded in reply. "Correct, but these older ones will help with many things, things آپ might not understand." He held a...

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Sample of my story

posted by cutiegirl01

We were the first ones back downstairs and sat and watched a دکھائیں about something that I wasn’t really following. A few منٹ later Sarus came down in a white t-shirt, blue jeans, and tennis shoes. He looked over at me and smiled, and we couldn’t help but laugh at each other.
Sarus looked over at Jenny and Annabelle, “You know آپ two are going to be dead right?”
“Yeah we know it was just fun to have to tie her hands behind her back and بتھ, مرغابی tape her mouth so that we could even change her. Getting the lip gloss on was interesting having her almost bite Annabelle’s finger off.”...