Okay this fits to be مضمون worthy. I have this budding idea for a story about a girl named Skye(real named skylar) who discovers that she and her two دوستوں are Sirens ( a different kind than آپ think). They all have ibdividual powers like Skye can use other peoples power, Hazelle and Gabriel,s powers are conjuring آگ کے, آگ and Hazelle can shapeshift objects. Their parents were دوستوں and there dads, and hazelle and gabriel have one parent while skye has none, she lives with her aunt and she has this lost sister who thinks she is a Siren but is their kinds' enemy. Meanwhile Hazelle and Gabriel are dating but skye and him are close because their moms were دوستوں and wjen her parents died she lived with them for a while as kids. So eventually they like each other. This story is confusing and jeeds work but its what i have. Tell me should i tweek it یا leave it alone. Also give me insight into what to do to fix it. Thanks.

Falling...

Sometimes she’s down سے طرف کی the river
یا other times سے طرف کی her tree
Sometimes she thinks about the things she can never see
But when the rain falls down, she’d cry
There’s no reason why

She’s always walked alone
No one’s ever shared her ride
No one’s ever felt close to her, no one’s ever سے طرف کی her side
She’s avoided سے طرف کی everyone
And never has any fun

Now darkness is her favourite thing
She thinks there’s no hope
No on ever throws her a rope
When she’s falling…