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posted by marissa
 “What do آپ want me to do… repent یا something?”
“What do you want me to do… repent or something?”
Chapter Four:

Jeremy:

    
“Yeah, right.”
    
“It’s the truth,” Benny said, holding up his hands to دکھائیں that his fingers weren’t crossed.
    
“Whatever آپ say, man.”
    
Benny thought for a moment. He had just let Jeremy Greene, a twenty-one-year-old mechanic on his way to visit his girlfriend, in on the fact that he was God.
    
“Okay, don’t believe me, that’s fine. I’m used to it, really,” Benny کہا with a laugh. “But, humour me.”
    
Jeremy huffed, crossing his arms over his chest. “What do آپ want me to do… repent یا something?”
    
“That would be great,” Benny کہا with an expectant smile. It occurred to Jeremy that Benny hadn’t realized he was being sarcastic.
    
He stared at Benny, his eyes narrowed. “You’re insane. Do آپ know that? آپ are an insane man on a bus. Not God.”
    
“Hey, God has to get around somehow.”
    
“Can’t God fly?”
    
“I’m not Superman.”
    
“You’re not God, either.”
    
The two sat together for a while, not saying anything. Benny wanted to give Jeremy a منٹ to cool off. He knew that Jeremy had a bad temper and didn’t want to upset him so much that he just walked away. یا hit him.
    
“You know,” Benny said, casually, “I don’t really expect آپ to repent right away. Admitting things is the first step.”
    
“What did آپ say?”
    
“What? Admitting things? Yeah, it’s the first step. آپ know that, right?”
    
Jeremy swallowed, hard.
    
“Don’t آپ know that step?”
    
“Buddy, I know all the steps.”
    
Benny nodded, slowly. “You can kick it, آپ know.”
    
“Kick what?”
    
“Your dirty little secret, your bad habit.”
    
Jeremy furrowed his brow. “Excuse me?”
    
Drinking,” Benny explained.
    
“I don’t drink.”
    
“Sure آپ do. How else would آپ know I was talking about the Alcoholics Anonymous twelve steps?”
    
“Lots of people know those.”
    
“Especially alcoholics.”
    
Jeremy quickly looked out the window.
    
Good, Benny thought, a reality check never hurt.
    
“You don’t have to be God to know that stuff. آپ could have seen me یا something,” he said, still looking out the window.
    
“I guess your right. But then again…” Benny said, drawing out his syllables irritatingly, “maybe you’re not.”
    
Jeremy didn’t say anything.
    
“You know what the سیکنڈ step is?” Benny asked.
    
“Yeah, uh… something about… power?”
    
“It’s coming to believe that a Power greater than ourselves could restore us to sanity,” Benny quoted.
    
“So what?”
    
Benny flashed him a big, toothy grin. “Meet the Power greater then yourself.”
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posted by Firewriter
This is a new book I've been working on to help channel my PTSD. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
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Chapter One
Underground

"Get back up to South Sector now!" A man's gruff voice boomed from the walkie-talkies clipped to the belts of the grey and زیتون green camouflage uniforms of the handful of guards. The harsh command reverberated in the deathly silent area as an individual stealthily crept through the heap of lifeless corpses which gazed emptily at him as he reached for one guard's static walkie-talkie. Sighing heavily in exhaustion from the fight he had to put up, he kicked at...
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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a چادر, فرغل walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When...
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posted by zanhar1
It’s raining. Not like a hard rain یا anything. Parker makes his way downy the highway with determination and a degree of speed that might not be exactly legal. But he isn’t going alarmingly fast. He maneuvers his car–a rather stylish Dodge Viper–into the fast lane. It isn’t the latest model but he has it painted a sleek purple some shade in between light and dark. After successfully making his pass he get back into the right lane. He’s behind a Chrysler Pacifica with a collect of bumper and window stickers.

From this he deduces that the driver is probably a soccer mom یا an unfortunate...
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posted by hgfan5602
Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and...
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posted by anbonie
“Nice performance!”
“Thank you, butler!”
Servant smile to Pieter and opens the door of red Ferrari. While driving no one used to speak, until Pieter say something to his butler and bodyguard:
“Did آپ hear when my voice trembled? I think that was 14th song.”
“No, Sir…”
“When my father isn’t near, please call me Pieter”
“Yes, Si… I mean Pieter”
They arrived to McChink’s mansion. Servant turned engine off and ran on other site of car to open Pieter’s door, but he was too late. “I’m sorry, Sir…” کہا butler. Pieter sent him angry look: “I can open the door!...
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posted by DxCFan123
That whole time, I had forgot about my powers. Everything. Like I was a regular person. But that scream, it was of help. What was I gonna do? I couldn't. It would hurt him. I couldn't use my powers. But I had to. I ran out of the cave. I looked around. It started to rain. I didn't do that. I couldn't change it. If I couldn't change the weather, What would I do if I couldn't control things? I saw it. A giant monster. It threw Bruno out of it's hands and onto the rough, muddy ground. "Bruno!" I screamed. I ran over to him. He was injured with a gash in his forhead and was bleeding from the back...
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posted by darkwave
No sun--no moon!
No morn--no noon!
No dawn--no dusk--no proper time of day--
No sky--no earthly view--
No distance looking blue--

No road--no street--
No "t'other side the way"--
No end to any Row--
No indications where the Crescents go--

No سب, سب سے اوپر to any steeple--
No recognitions of familiar people--
No courtesies for دکھانا 'em--
No knowing 'em!

No mail--no post--
No news from any foreign coast--
No park--no ring--no afternoon gentility--
No company--no nobility--

No warmth, no cheerfulness, no healthful ease,
No comfortable feel in any member--
No shade, no shine, no butterflies, no bees,
No fruits, no flowers, no leaves, no birds,
November!
posted by StarWarsFan7
As McKenna and I board the bus, we sit اگلے to each other in the front. "Hey, I've heard of this song!" I تبصرہ on the song that's playing in the background. "...Sippin sizzurp in my ride, like Three 6, Now I'm feelin so fly like a G6..." "Yeah...sure...whatever..." McKenna responds to me with her eyes locked on her yellow and black cell phone. "What's up?" I ask. "Nothing!" She shuts her cell phone like she's hiding سونا from a bank. My cell phone ring-tone sounds. "I can't stop my feet from dancin' to the sound of his drum. I fell in love with my Rooock god!" I press the "Answer" button...
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posted by sahour95
She had left.
She is long gone; away from everything that connects her to this cruel world, dead, buried underneath the blue, glittering waves of the ocean. Shattered into small pieces, flew away from her body, leaving deep wounds in the دل of everyone who had loved her. He would never cry enough tears to erase her memory; no tears were enough to express that endless sea of grief and sorrow he sank gradually in. He would never stand enough hours in front of her grave to grasp the concept that she won't tap his shoulder and wake him up from a horrible dream. She is... Dead.
He looked around...
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posted by Annacrombie
This chapter is a bit dark just to warn you


It was a dark night and she had just arrived ہوم from work, she stared upon the slits across her wrists from گزشتہ times.She blinked back a tear and looked at the door, so many times he had walked through there and now he was gone.


"Its not worth it" she کہا "why did it have to end this way?"She grabed a چھری and tried to slit her wrist, but the چھری was covered in blood and was blunt.


She walked up to the سب, سب سے اوپر of her flat building, it was 5 stories high, if she jumped she knew she would never live "Im sorry" she whispered.
"KARA! shouted a voice...
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