Writing Article: Vialo: proligue

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posted by khfan12

Vialo By: Josie Mahre

Prolige
"Run, Ella, run!" کہا Vialo. "I'm running as fast as I can!" Ella said. Vialo is a 14-year-old girl with the unique name Vialo Tarah Wilson, also, she has superpowers and the ability to take over / rule the universe / save the universe. Her friend, Ella Newbie, also has superpowers. "Ella, we can hide here." کہا Vialo. "Vialo, go on without me. I'll catch up." کہا Ella. "No. I'll just telaport us out." کہا Vialo. "No! Vialo, they'll find آپ easier!" کہا Ella. All of a sudden, some people walked up to them. "You two aren't out yet?" asked one. "No Jasper. we aren't as smart as you" کہا Vialo, kidding around. Jasper Talley is 14, has superpowers, is also her boyfreind. Steve Hawks is 14 and has superpowers too. Then, a gas spread into the room. "Oh no! Knock out gas!" کہا Steve. As Vialo coughed on the gas, she saw someone coming. "J-Jess, h-help us......" Vialo said, as her and the others fell asleep. Later, Vialo and her freinds woke up. "Vialo! آپ okay? I always knew that Jess was evil. Jess was always working with Jack." کہا Jasper. "Hey! آپ prisoners, Jack and Jess will see آپ now. We'll escort you." کہا a guard. 3 other guards stepped out. The guards looked like trolls. They were mucleheads. They threw the cage doors off. "Will ya cut that out? were'nt made of money!" کہا one guard. They each grabbed someone and started walking. "Well, well, well. Look who it is. If it isn't Vialo and her freinds. آپ change your mind yet?" asked Jack. "No. I'd rather die than desert my freinds. Remember, Jack, we'll never forget what آپ did." کہا Vialo. Jack grabbed her. "Yes but I'll never forget you, Vialo." کہا Jack. Vialo and her freinds always knew that Jack liked Vialo, but Vialo and Jasper are going out instead and plus, Vialo never liked bullies. "Hey get your hands off of me!" کہا Vialo, trying to yank her arm away from Jack. Jack laughed. "You're still the same old Vialo. The same one that I fell in love with 2 years ago." He pulled her close. "And I'm still in love with you." Jack said. Vialo wriggled free, then slapped Jack. "I'll never love someone like you. آپ know I never liked bullies." کہا Vialo. She spit on him. That did it. "WHY آپ LITTLE!" Jess said. She lunged at Vialo, aiming to مککا, عجیب الخلقت her. One of the guards held her back. "Freeze them!" کہا Jack. When they were in the freeze chamber, Vialo and Jasper hugged. "I love you, Vialo." whisperd Jasper. "I love آپ too, Jasper." replied Vialo. As they hugged, Vialo, Jasper, Ella, and Steve were frozen. "Want to take them out?" asked Jess. "No. They'll defrost quicker. Leave them in there." کہا Jack, walking away from the scene.

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Dearheart I think you need to run your Vialo person through this character test: http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm In fact, I'd recommend this to EVERY person who's trying their hand at writing a fantasy or romance novel. It's extremely helpful when it comes to avoiding cliches and creating a well-rounded character. Please don't get discouraged, khfan12! I'm not trying to be mean or diss this story; I'm just being honest as a fellow writer. I want to help you grow and develop your skills, that's all. Your story has potential; you just need to tweak it and run it through a spelling/grammar check. Keep writing and practicing! You'll only get better! :)

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Trapped in my own time Chapter 7

posted by dragonrider

"So Starr what is going on?" my mom asks me when Elliot and I sit on the سوفی, لٹانا "And who is this?" she motions to Elliot
"I'm Elliot from 2009. I'm excited to be here Mrs Makenzie I love your daughter," he says
My mom raises her eyebrows "Oh wow already? Starr please explain,"
I sigh "I chose the wrong job mom. Oh sure I chose the job where it sounds the most interesting but little did I know I was working for the bad guys,"
My dad walks in with پاپ کارن, پوپکارن and sits down "Please start at the beginning Starr I want to hear everything," he says
I sigh "Okay so آپ guys know I was in 2009 right?"
...

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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 1

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I’m finally on my own, alone. I just turned eighteen a couple of months پہلے and I got a job offer in Los Angeles California. I’ve been writing since I could write and when I reached junior high I joined the new paper and I did the same in high school and in my سیکنڈ سال of high school I was offered a job as a reported for the Salem New Hampshire news paper and I accepted. My job threw the years had grown and now that I’m done high school I can take the job offer.
Ya my parents were pissed when the found out I wasn’t going to collage but if آپ think about it...

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Chapter 4 Trapped in my own time

posted by dragonrider

"Oh my god Starr! Oh I didn't mean to surprise you! Well I did but I didn't know آپ would faint! Oh wake up Starr!" Elliot's voice rang out
I feel him shaking me. I can't bring myself to open my eyes to see him.
"Well I guess I have to be like that prince in sleeping beauty and kiss آپ awake," his voice rang out again. I feel pressure on my body
My eyes shoot open just in time before Elliot kisses me. I push him off.
"Get the hell of off me آپ idiot!" I yell standing up. I brush myself. I rub the back of my head that is stinging in pain. I feel wet stuff come off my head. I look at it...

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Death. My new پسندیدہ word.

posted by alice_cullen_12

Day 1 of my diary
Dear Esmerelda (diary),
Death is my new پسندیدہ word. Closely followed سے طرف کی tragedy. I made a فہرست of my new پسندیدہ words since "He Who I Can Not Name, Because He Broke My Heart" left. Oh, all right. His name is . . . John. Oh, I want to die! Anyway, here's the list:

1. Death

2. Tragedy

3. Suicide

4. Hate

5. Nothing

6. Night

7. Darkness

8. Devil

I don't know what to do. I decided that I would wear all black. I'm going goth. He Who I Can Not Name hated goths. I like the Goth Club at my school. I never have to smile یا laugh. And we trade ways to kill ourselves every Wednesday at...

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Westville: Chapter 1: Welcome to Westville

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I winded the car window down; I could smell the fresh air, it was peaceful. My name is Katelyn Peers, I’m sixteen years old and I have never met my parents. The only family member I have ever known is my brother, Sam, he is my age, his my twin and usually twins are meant to have a bond, there is no bond for us, the only reason he puts up with me is because of our father, I have never met him, but Sam has, and for some reason he has respect for the man. I used to go to Down پار, صلیب academy for girls that were until I ran away a سال پہلے with Sam. I turned to see Sam driving the car; his long...

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Who are the real monsters: Chapter 1: The Antiworld Part 2

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

“There آپ are, man” کہا Marley. Opal had blood dripping from her mouth; her eyes were shining red as the shadows off the درخت darken her whole body. “Looks like we’re all done here, let’s اقدام out before they wake up” کہا Alec. Later on while Marley was lying on his bed, the same thought came across his mind, should the others know about their secret. “Marley, someone’s here for you” کہا Marley’s mum. “Hey man””It’s us”. This is Lindsay and Slone Sudiro (Lindsay 14, Slone 12) Lindsay level is higher than Opals, Slone’s is no better than Nathan’s. They are...

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Underworld Chapter 5: Road trips

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped سے طرف کی Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have مزید of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...

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Gods: Chapter 10: Adam's سیب, ایپل

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I woke up, still in Ethan’s arms; my face was up against his chest. I slowly moved up, Ethan noticed this, he let go of me. I got up and walked over to the باورچی خانے, باورچی خانہ table. Why was I in Ethan’s arms? But then I remembered. ‘Adam.......he’s dead’ Dawns words came to my head. I nearly fell down again, but arms caught me. “Whoa....come on” Ethan کہا pulling me back to the couch. I was now sitting on the couch, Ethan sat beside me. “How did he....?” I asked. I sounded angry but I wasn’t I just couldn’t feel anything else. “We don’t know” Ethan answered me. He was trying...

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Memories - A Poem

posted by Cuddles

A/N: My first poem I post here...I hope it is any good.

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Memories

Far distant seem to be
the things I now call memory.
The good and bad, the right and wrong
share a thing, cause they are gone.

Long forgotten feelings rise
each of them in their disguise.
They are not dead, so it only seems
waiting patiently to haunt me in my dreams.

Will it ever cease to be?
Even if it's called memory
Does that mean I always have to remember
to give up, to hide from them, to surrender?

Whenever I fight them I will lose.
I have nothing between I could choose.
No matter...

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Nightfall #1(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Ten

posted by adamk

CHAPTER TEN:
Two hours pass, and during those hours, I ponder what to do next. Danny lays unconscious, his wounds have healed, but I can sense he still is in pain. On impulse, I have injected him with my blood. I enough to turn him into a vampire. I know he will not be as powerful as I was when I was turned, as I have not دیا him enough to accomplish this feat. I lay back in a chair, continuing to ponder my اگلے move. I am startled when the phone rings. When I look at the clock, it is eleven thirty. I answer, not knowing what to expect. “Hello?” I answer. “Hey Ashley.” I hear from...

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Not really a scary story but a true story

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: okay i actually found this story in my local newspaer from 20 years back. And i'll put a symbol for town names. I don't want rapists یا pheaodifiles coming to my town... okay lets begin. And i shall have to give some background history. Well at there was a renovation going on at $ which was between # and &, for an old mental asylum to be converted into a power house musuem. Anyway so this story takes place then. I think i'm not sure of dates.
$ was a small town, very small as in like only three -5 thousande people

okay so in Australia out in the country there was a young couple travelling...

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Sample Chapter: Beyond a Dream

posted by xXDreamWriterXx

This is the rough draft of the first chapter of "Beyond a Dream" It's a book that I'm currently writing but it would nice to get some feedback about it. Its long but hope آپ like it!

Chapter 1

“What! We’re moving?!”

Aria stares at her father, Thomas, with disbelief and utter horror. Thomas sat in his پسندیدہ seat; a maroon armrest chair with soft kind of fabric that made it hard not to touch. His shoulder length silver layered hair and black framed glasses that went over his gray eyes made him look like the plain glasses business man that he was. Aria stood in the middle of their living...

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"Weeds are Flowers, Too"

posted by ChiliPepperLuv

People say flowers are beautiful.
They're beautiful, that's true.
They also provide oxygen for us.
People say weeds are ugly.
They apparently have no value,
Nor do they deserve to live.
I'm not talking weeds that grow in the garden.
I'm talking about wild plants.
Well, weeds are flowers, too.
Just give them a chance.
Once آپ get to know them, they're amazing.
They can be just as pretty as flowers.
I may not be an orchid یا a sunflower.
I may not be a rose یا an iris.
I'm مزید of a dandelion.
I may be a weed, but I'm not so bad.
Give me half a chance. I'm pretty neat.
So, weeds are flowers, too.
Get to know them. They're pretty great.

The Super Cute Crush

posted by mermaidgirl1010

Another دن in paradise, NOT!
Just another summer دن of hanging out with دوستوں and such.
Omg. He. Is. Hot. My friend and I were riding our bikes and I saw the cutest guy IN THE UNIVERSE. Well, maybe I am exaggerating but STILL! He is hot!
I must have been staring because the اگلے منٹ I was on a tree. OMG. He was looking at ME!!!!!!! ''Hi I'm Brady."
"I......I........." OMG! Sooooo stupid! My best friend was gone now and he leaned down. OMG. He kissed me! Then...... gone. I was in my bed. Was it a dream? Well, I think i'll check just to be sure.

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 31

posted by Insight357

Alexander stood in front of me. I was looking up at him from my spot in the shower.
    “Now what did آپ think آپ were going to accomplish سے طرف کی coming down here?” He asked, and looked around.
    “I thought آپ wouldn’t find me,” I admitted sheepishly. It sounded stupid when I کہا it.
    “Your thought process has yet to amaze me,” he chuckled. “This room is sound proof, right?”
    “Uh, yeah. Why?” I looked up at him curiously.
    “Just wondering if that maintenance...

Psychoanalysis

posted by Insight357

I was outside. It was hot and sunny. About summer time, I was guessing. Beside of me set an old room. It was in ruins. I studied it for a moment, and then it hit me.
    The room was the one I had been in when I put the چھری through my heart. I walked over to it, and ran my hand over the charred remains.
    It started to rain, sprinkling at first, and then it became harder. I took shelter in the room, half of the roof still stood.
    The sun was in the eastern part of the sky, and it was raining in the west. I saw a قوس قزح emerging...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 26

posted by Insight357

I went back to the motel after Lucy left. I never did figure out why she was running. اگلے time I saw her I would ask…Hopefully I would see her again.
Damien is all alone کہا a voice. I shook my head, as my hands began to shake and my دل raced.I sat on the creaky motel bed. It was cold, and hard. I didn’t care though. I was too emotionless to care. I didn’t feel like I was apart of this world. The walls and furniture were only an illusion, and this was my hell. I had already died. Maybe if I died in hell I would be officially dead.
Damien...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 24

posted by Insight357

I paced around the room, Alexander would be ہوم in a few minutes. I was going to tell him what happened between Grey and me. I was nervous, but I had to do it. It wasn’t fair of me not too.
“Alexander, I know this is bad, but I must tell you,” I practiced aloud, staring at the empty wall. “I slept with Grey, and I know I shouldn’t have done it, but she seduced me. I tried to say no, but I was too weak. I really tried, though. Please, please forgive me Alexander. We can work it out, I know we can,” I thought I was doing really well; I prayed he would forgive...

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