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posted by ellie_bellie135
When آپ use greif in your writing it's very important آپ get it right so here is a short مضمون to help you.

Here is an extract from link

Grief is a somewhat commplicated and misunderstood emotion. Yet, grief is something that, unfortunately, we must all experience at some time یا other. We will all inevitably experience loss. Whether it is a loss through death, divorce یا some other loss, the stages of grieving are the same.

The five stages of grief are:

1-Denial-"this can't be happening to me", looking for the former spouse in familia places, یا if it is death, setting the میز, جدول for the person یا acting as if they are still in living there. No crying. Not accepting یا even acknowledging the loss.


2-Anger-"why me?", feelings of wanting to fight back یا get even with spouse of divorce, for death, anger at the deceased, blaming them for leaving.


3-Bargaining-bargaining often takes place before the loss. Attempting to make deals with the spouse who is leaving, یا attempting to make deals with God to stop یا change the loss. Begging, wishing, praying for them to come back.


4-Depression-overwhelming feelings of hopelessness, frustration, bitterness, self pity, mourning loss of person as well as the hopes, dreams and plans for the future. Feeling lack of control, feeling numb. Perhaps feeling suicidal.


5-Acceptance-there is a difference between resignation and acceptance. آپ have to accept the loss, not just try to برداشت, ریچھ it quietly. Realization that it takes two to make یا break a marriage. Realization that the person is gone (in death) that it is not their fault, they didn't leave آپ on purpose. (even in cases of suicide, often the deceased person, was not in their right frame of mind) Finding the good that can come out of the pain of loss, finding comfort and healing. Our goals turn toward personal growth. Stay with fond memories of person.



When آپ write it's very important آپ use these steps properly and in that order.
Thought it's very tempting to make your character angry, grief is مزید powerful than anger.
Though grief shouldn't be misused for minor things when anger would be مزید apropiate.

A good example of this, I think, is in Wolverine, when his wife was killed and he was instantly angry. I thought something was a bit off about it and that it was a bit cold and the reason for this was I don't think it was powerful enough. This is because anger was used when it should have been denial. And though it was well done, it could have been better if the writer had been مزید skillful when using grief. (I'm not bagging out Wolverine. It's one of my favortie movies. PLEASE DON'T SUE ME.)

I hope this will help to improve your writing.

Thank آپ for reading.

Happy writing.
posted by house_of_nightx
THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri کہا my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of بستر to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...
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posted by mitchie19
3. P H O N E C A L L

The phone rang about 9am I was the one who answered. Norah went to the store to buy groceries and my sister is upstairs still asleep. I picked up the phone, “Hello?” I spoke the word softly. “Mariah? This is your aunt Lourdes How are you?” She کہا happily. I didn’t expect her to call at this moment but I was surprised. “Hi Aunt Lourdes um, I’m fine. Why’d آپ call?” is the
why’d-you-call-thing the right thing to say to someone ten times older than me?
She didn’t mind me saying that.
“I told your mom that آپ are welcome to stay here for the summer....
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Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought آپ here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are آپ guys so pale?"
"Well we are vampires like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I started to wake up and open my eyes to see Tilly, 'Hey sorry bout that, Tyler should have been مزید aware but he is stupid oh damm his going to kill me'. I sat there puzzled 'Umm what do آپ mean' she laughed and sat down beside me 'WE can hear each others thoughts except yours only your soul mate can do that but ارے it seems like آپ have to of them'.

She walked out and I rubbed my eye's and looked at my phone it کہا One new message, I opened it and it was from Oni: ارے your dads coming out today so maybe آپ should go back ہوم with him if آپ know what I mean but آپ can stay if آپ want...
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posted by sexiitreysongz
CHAPTER 1
10 years پہلے I lost both my parents in a car crash. I've been living on my own for about 8 years, I lived with my grandmother for a while untill I got a job and found an apartment for real cheep. I never realized what it was like to lose your parents and feel this bad. I never knew my self would be in this postion. Alone, no true family, a baby on the way. How do these girls deal with kind of stuff. They act like everything is so easy,and they have nothing to worry about. Maybe becasue they have moms and grandmothers to help them out. I have no body. My grandmother kicked me out after...
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posted by hannah_vampire
Its pretty Long thxs for the تبصرے :)

I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I looked at the screen and I saw melissa.baker :) and no this was not Damons sister it was the melissa I got drunk with.

'Hey mel whats up?' I hearded her laugh, 'Finally were have آپ been it's like آپ had dropped off the face of earth'. I laughed and started to walk to the mirror, 'Melissa آپ have no idea and It's good to hear آپ other then the same people all the time and if your gonna ask if I can come out no I cant visting my dad and I have shit to work out, so i better go love ya mwaa', She laughed...
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posted by PrinceLover1999
Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...
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posted by inexplicable
I ran against the wind which came contrary to me.
I ran against the wind which approached me till I adhered to the parapet panting. Hardly anybody was مزید in the park although it was rather warmly and still not at all so dark. The sun just set and the water under me turned orange-red now. I needed a while, before I came to the quiet, then I did not برداشت, ریچھ it any مزید and the tears forced her way. I knew that she lied. I knew that this not corresponded to the truth what she had کہا to me. I did not have any proof for it but I could feel that there was something wrong. I did not want any more....
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posted by MileySelena982
*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please تبصرہ and tell me if آپ like and what’s your پسندیدہ part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Three

“Are آپ sure it was David?” Mom asked as she comforted Selena on the couch.

“I’m positive.” Selena replied. “I’d know that face from anywhere. And… if I was never his girlfriend, he never would have gone to that jewelry store, and he never would have died!”

Mom didn’t reply. She knew her daughter was feeling guilty, and nothing could help it. Instead she said, “But, sweetie, he loved...
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posted by mitchie19
2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a سٹار, ستارہ on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. ڈریک Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...
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Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student یا something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When آپ know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...
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“What?!” I half cried. I grabbed his شرٹ, قمیض and gasped from the air in my throat wanting to get out.
    “Get ready, we are going to be late. آپ okay?” he asked calmly. You, go, away, my inner self told me.
    “I’m fine. Bye. I’ll be down in a minute.” I said, softly releasing my tight grip on Looi’s white t-shirt. After about 20 منٹ of getting knots out of my hair, getting my کوٹ to button, and getting my tote bag ready for school, Looi yelled, “Let’s go!” and I heard him shuffle down the stairs.
    As...
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If I took three showers, and washed with 15 shampoos, my hair would still be tangled after an hour. Looi, my brother, always کہا my hair looked like I dyed it, when I didn’t. I looked down, my shoes were already on with the black shoe laces. I felt like I needed to barf. At least that’s what it felt like. Greeting hopped on the counter and stared at me. The brown cat فر, سمور was splotched with black dots and white lines. She is a different cat, that’s why I like her. I looked back at the mirror. Well, آپ look terrible today, I thought.
    “Greeting, آپ can’t look...
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This is something I'm working on.. It's the first long piece I've attempted. People often told me I'm too good at imagery and تفصیل to write anything short. Perhaps I use too much imagery? I'm curious about what آپ guys think.

I already know it's a bit shakey at some parts. I still need to do some revising. I revise every time I finish reading a book. I feel each book teaches me مزید and مزید about writing.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Welcome to Birchmoss
preview
(This was just a part of my planning and organization. It is subject to change)

Violet kept her skeletons right where they belonged. Hidden away...
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posted by hannah_vampire
thxs for the تبصرے plz keep commenting thxs so much :)

I had not been to school which I kinda liked but I had to get out I hated it here and when i know that he likes me it makes it مزید hard just to even look at sefo it kills me.

I stayed away from him for aleast a week, I had to talk to him but alone and the only time i could talk to him was now, He was standing near the water and it was sunset how perfect is this!
He turned and saw we walk down towards him 'Hey Belle look before آپ say anything your wrong i know that' I stayed at him excuse me did he just say I was wrong 'Look here sefo...
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Thanks to all those who read the last chapter, oh, and please be apart of the War of Hearts Rp!!! It's really fun to do!:D




~2. New and Mysterious

S
uddenly, a great light shone before me in the dark. And the Key responded to it, so - as if on instinct - I lifted the magic Key and pointed it right at the light. I heard a sound, like a door opening, and suddenly I was engulfed in the pleasant warmth of light.

Very slowly, I opened my eyes and blinked a few times until my vision cleared. I immediately saw tall town-like buildings, a white stoned ground (the ground I was sitting on), and clear, open...
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posted by serenacullen93
I wish that my mother was here that stupid drunk driver had never been born it was my fault that she died that she is now six feet under the ground . I remember that night like it was yesterday I had snuck out with my دوستوں to go to this party down town . Things got out control I called my mom from the side of the road for my mother to come get me one of the guys from the party zoomed down the road and hit my mother head on . I saw it I was right out side the car I saw the red hot metal cut into my mother flesh ending her life with one feel-swoop like the cut of a blade. The ones who should...
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posted by amethyst44
(this is realistic-fiction, some parts are true and some are false. that should become evident as time goes on ^.^)

~~~

Everything fell when David left.

I never understood why. He was just a friend to me at that time, and دوستوں back then were any people that I could get in a conversation with. They were people that listened. And really, seeing him leave was just as normal as any of my other دوستوں that left during that year. There was nothing too it; I would convince myself over and over again that he would eventually come back, and that we might even meet up in the future and talk about our...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I sat on the table, Wondering why my dad was so pissed off not just at me but also at something else the doctor کہا that it would healing very fast dont ask me how but he کہا it would.

2 Weeks later

I healed really quick to my suprise even though i didn't believe what he کہا was true for some reson I felt like it was and what do آپ know it was. I drove to school thinking how it could be true and having that guys vocie in my head i mean my dad lying to me but why?.

When i got out of my car, I decided to go sit on one of the tables were soon after i was joined سے طرف کی one of the vampire freak show's...
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posted by starwarsfangirl
I wrote this is five minutes. Not that good, I know.
It's in the point of view of a fire.
It's in a fireplace in a living room.
Hope آپ enjoy.
Read to the rhythym آپ would
'The Night Before Christmas'


I flickered and jumped
and sat on the logs
and watched as the human
kicked off his clogs.

The dog soon followed
and sat سے طرف کی his side
and they soon were asleep
and my flame soon died.

But a flicker did linger
and I wondered a bit.
When would be the اگلے time
that I would be lit?

-starwarsfangirl
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