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Chapter Three

All throughout their patrol, it was all James could do to keep his attention (and eyes) on the task at hand. He was still going over the گھنٹہ before patrol in his head, trying to make sense of it. Lily Evans, always the stoic one, afraid? It was hard to get his head around. Lily had always been the one to keep her head in the most panic-worthy of situations – like the time she found out that Remus is a werewolf.

It had been a particularly difficult full moon, the last one of their sixth سال at Hogwarts. Wolf-Remus had been مزید vicious than usual and both James and Sirius were sporting various wounds in different stages of blood clotting. They were trying – in vain – to restrain him before he did any مزید damage to himself, the Shrieking Shack یا them, when finally dawn began to break and Remus began the difficult transformation back to his human self. James and Sirius settled down to watch, slightly wary. Sometimes, the aggression didn't quite fade away with the breaking of a new day, and even in his human form Remus would struggle against them, biting and scratching even in his weakened state. So far, tonight had had all the signs of one of those times.
Fifteen منٹ later, Remus lay in a trembling heap on the ground, human again but not really looking it. یا acting it – sure enough, as soon as James and Sirius, also in their human forms, got close enough, he began to snarl in a threatening manner.
“Relax, mate, it's just us. Moony? It's just us. Prongs and Padfoot.”
Snarl.
“Come on, mate we gotta go. Gotta get آپ up to the hospital wing.” Sirius jumped in. They were sort of circling around Remus, trying to get closer without making him threatened enough to attack – it had been known to happen. James signalled to Sirius, and wordlessly counted to three; on the third they pounced, restraining Remus as best they could, and still he struggled. James raised his eyebrows at Sirius, and he nodded: tonight was an extreme case. Sirius dug out his wand and whispered, “
Stupefy!
James hated having to Stun Remus, but some nights it was a necessity. There was no way they were going to get him up to the hospital wing with him struggling like that... but Madam Pomfrey was probably going to kill them.
They made their slow way to the base of the Whomping Willow, and James reached out his had to press the tiny knob that froze the branches. Usually that was Peter's job, Peter in his tiny چوہا form... but Peter wasn't around, they hadn't seen him for days. James hoped he hadn't gotten himself into trouble, but he had مزید important issues at hand. This was always the hardest part, getting an often unconscious Remus through the hole at the base of the درخت and into Hogwarts grounds. This time, however, something was different...
Lily Evans was standing اگلے to the entrance of the tunnel, waiting with a stretcher and two bottles of water.
“I thought آپ might need these,” she کہا simply when she saw James' dumbfounded expression. “Come on, let's get Remus up to the hospital wing, آپ can stutter out your سوالات later.” She handed the water to the boys and helped them out of the hole before turning to Remus and heaving him out with surprising strength. “Guys, honestly. What's up? Do I look funny? Is something wrong?”
Silence.
“All right, then, why don't آپ help me with this battered werewolf? He needs medical attention, آپ know. As do you,” she added, eyeing the boys' cuts and bruises disapprovingly, and turning her attention back to Remus, now lying on the ground. The boys watched with open amazement as she sighed and levitated him onto the stretcher – apparently her strength wasn't limitless. With a last look over her shoulder, she started to guide the stretcher up to the castle, trusting the boys to follow her.
Finally, James' brain began to work again. “Hey! Evans! Evans, wait up!”
Exasperated sigh. “What now, Potter?”
“You can't just go barging into the قلعہ like that. People will see –“
“Honestly, Potter, here I thought آپ were smart. It's the crack of dawn, for Merlin's sake! And anyway, I cloaked us. آپ two are the only people who can see me یا this stretcher.”
“Huh. Guess you're مزید than just a pretty face, Evans, yeah?”
Sirius walked up behind me. “Prongs, mate, if آپ haven't figured that out yet... you're screwed.” Evans just looked amused.
“Guys? The hospital wing?”
“Oh, right. Lead the way, fair lady!” James کہا with a mock bow, earning him another, equally exasperated sigh.


He smiled as he remembered the day.
“Knut for your thoughts?” Lily asked.
“Huh? Oh, I was just remembering the time آپ found out about Moony's... condition.”
“Oh, آپ mean the time آپ guys were so dumbstruck someone had figured out your great secret that I had to drag poor Remus up to the hospital wing all سے طرف کی myself?”
“Yeah, that would be the one.”
“But did آپ honestly think no one would ever figure it out?”
“Um... yes?”
Lily laughed. “Well, you're lucky not everybody is as smart as me, then.”
“That we are. But hey. آپ never did tell us – what tipped آپ off?”
“You mean apart from the fact that a) there's only so many times آپ can visit your sick insert relative here at full moon, b) few normal humans are afraid of full moons and c) آپ call him Moony?”
“... right. So آپ just, what, followed us one beautiful full moon?”
“No, silly. It's not like I'd put myself in the line of آگ کے, آگ – I watched from the window until I saw a wolf, a ہرن, چھوٹے and a dog disappear through the hole at the base of the Whomping Willow.” When she mentioned the ہرن, چھوٹے and the dog, James' expression froze noticably. Lily continued in an innocent tone, “Does Dumbledore know, سے طرف کی the way? That آپ two – and probably Peter too – are illegal Animagi?”
“About that... do آپ think آپ could, maybe, not tell him?”
“Who do آپ think I am, Severus?” James noted the obvious distaste with which she کہا the name of her former best friend and smiled to himself. He almost missed Lily continuing her sentence. “I'm not going to run to Dumbledore. Anyway, that's pretty impressive magic, turning yourself into an Animagus. How in the world did Peter manage?”
“He nearly didn't,” James کہا with a laugh. “The first time he changed, he nearly became a چوہا forever.”
“McGonagall would probably have been proud,” she said, with just the tiniest hint of sarcasm. “But. My silence has one condition: you'll let me come with آپ on full moons.” All the humour was now gone from her expression.
“Lily, did آپ not listen in third-year Defence Against the Dark Arts? Werewolves are vicious during the full moon. They don't differentiate between friend and foe. Remus would tear آپ limb from limb.”
“But that's just the thing: from what I've seen, آپ guys get pretty torn up too. So what I'm proposing is this: آپ let me wait for آپ outside the passage, so in case آپ need back-up, someone knows where آپ are. So that if... if آپ don't come back at dawn, there'll be someone to alert Dumbledore.”
“Look, Lily, I'm touched that you'd do that for us... but it's too dangerous. What if we can't keep him in the Shack?”
“James, your concern is appreciated and all, but have آپ ever seen me Stun anyone? Not to toot my own horn یا anything.”
“Come to think of it... no, I haven't.”
“Well, let's just say آپ don't want me to demonstrate it on you.” She looked him square in the eye. “So. Deal یا no deal?”
“I'm going to have to talk it over with Sirius – and Remus is going to be extremely against this idea – but I say deal.”
“It better be.”

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James had been right: Sirius was against the idea because Lily was a girl, and specifically James' all-time dream girl, which was bound to equal distraction, and Remus because he didn't want to risk harming another person. Peter was not present, which was honestly not that surprising – they were seeing less and less of him that year.
“Guys, honestly. I don't know about you, but I'd feel better knowing there was someone that had our back – and Padfoot, before آپ start, it's not just because it's Lily.”
“Really?”
“Yes! Really. And besides, she کہا she'd go to Dumbledore if we didn't let her.”
“She کہا that?” Remus asked, his unwillingness clear in his expression.
“Well... not exactly. Not in those words. But it was very clearly implied.”
“As in...?”
“As in, 'My silence has one condition.'”
“Oh. So we pretty much have no choice?”
“I would say so.”
“Fine. But that doesn't mean I like it. What if she's seen?”
“She won't be – I'll leave her my Cloak.”
“And does she know she'll be left the Cloak?”
“As of right now? Nope.”
“Ah. Well, آپ better go tell her we agreed before we change our minds, Prongs.” James gave them a grateful smile before leaving his old dorm and heading towards the Heads' Quarters, a slight spring in his step.

––––––––

“So they agreed.” Lily stated, a triumphant expression on her face.
“Yeah, but there's one thing: آپ can't be seen.”
“Why?”
“And here I thought آپ were مزید than just a pretty face...” James teased, earning him a ذائقہ, مارنا on the arm. “Anyway, don't آپ think people would wonder if they saw آپ sitting out the night سے طرف کی the Whomping Willow once a month?”
“You do have a point. But no worries, I can do a decent Disillusionment Charm.”
“Ah, but آپ don't need to,” he کہا mysteriously.
“How else do آپ suggest on making me invisible, then?”
Wordlessly, James pulled the Invisibility چادر, فرغل out of his school robes.
“James – is that – an Invisibility Cloak?”
He drew it around himself, leaving only his head visible. “Does this answer your question?”
“It – yes. But is it an actual Invisibility Cloak? Not just a normal چادر, فرغل with some charm cast on it? But... however did آپ get it?”
“It's been in family for ages and ages, and it's still going strong – so I guess it must be real, not that I ever thought about it.”
“So I suppose now I know how you've managed all your pranks?”
“Yep.”
“And I'm not supposed to tell anyone?”
“Uh, yeah. آپ understand, right?”
“That the secrets of the almighty Marauders must be kept secret, lest their credibility goes? Yeah, I understand.”
“Awesome.”

–––––––

“All right, all right! Guys. Calm down, okay?” It was the third week of school, and James was trying to calm the Prefects down at their weekly meeting. “We – that is, your amazingly wonderful Head Girl and I –“ Lily smacked his arm for what had to have been the tenth time that week, and it was only Tuesday “– have some news for you.”
A chorus of 'Ooooh's rose up, and James kicked himself for not having worded that better. “Regrettably, not that.” He fully expected another smack, but even Lily seemed to have grown tired of the constant violence. “Yes, well, anyway, my point was this: seeing as آپ all now that dark forces are at work, yadda yadda yadda, there's a war coming and so forth, we've decided that the students – especially the younger ones – need some entertainment in the dark winter months ahead. Which is why... we've decided to hold a Winter Ball – well, that's what it will officially be called. In actual fact, this is how it's going to be: around seven pm on a دن that is yet to be decided, the entire school will meet in the Great Hall for a feast...” Lily tuned out James' speech – she had no need to listen to him explaining the event they'd planned just last week. She did, however, marvel at how eloquent James seemed to be while addressing the Prefects. They seemed to almost... respect him? No, that wasn't possible. This was James Potter, after all: he may have commanded many things, but respect – unless it was from a fellow prankster – was not often one of those things.
Huh. Maybe he really has changed.
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I was just a little girl. I was in my own world. Thats a lie. Every little girl is in a world of her own. I acted as if I was five years older than I should be. I'm not normal, remember? Well I was at my Grandmothers house to spend the weekend. My cousin always prefered...
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1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting...
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added by amutokitty
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Scott: I wasn't scared to jump off the cliff into the water with sharks! I was just thinking that I would scare the pee out of the sharks, and make the challenge easier. Well, that's not my plan! Hehehe

Challenge ended elimination time

The villainous vultures won so the heroic hamsters had to vote and Courtney and Lindsay were at risk, but Lindsay got the boot

After 3 challenges Courtney got switched...
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Prologue

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posted by ZekiYuro
Lisa Tyler was weary after a long,hard دن at the pottery factory where she works.But as she approached her ہوم in the English city of Stoke-on-Trent,her دل lightened:soon she would be having a nice cup of tea,putting her feet up and watching Friends,her favourite TV series.But first,she needed to change out of her work clothes and pick up her 3-year-old son from his grandmother's house nearby.

As Lisa walked up her garden path,she noticed a light flashing on and off in an upstairs bedroom.A shiver went down her back.What if it was a burglar?Quietly,she crept round to the back of the house...
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Chapter 1: Annabeth

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 Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu
Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu
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I woke up feeling groggy. My eyes were swollen from crying, and my head felt like it'd been hit with a sledge hammer a couple of times. Niki's head was on my shoulder, his blonde hair was dry now, and his eyes were also swollen and pink.
I slowly put Niki's head on a soft trash bag then I scooted out from the hollow tree's cover. Standing there in the forest made me realize something. It made me realize that sometimes Death brings sadness and sometimes it brings a reason, a meaning, یا a story. Niki کہا that he'd burned the tree... with his hands. But, I'm not sure if that's true at all....
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posted by RanmaRaj
I wrote this Song when my girl broke off with me

My college's band کہا it was too boring and told me to write another

I'd shared it with Kathy(Lilacool)
She کہا she liked it......Thanks Kathy


In the center of my heart
there is a deep pain
as if struck سے طرف کی a dart
blood is all going drain

but wait a minute
am i..............?

'tis there all دن and night
either asleep یا awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it یا give it a shake

but on سیکنڈ thought
am i..............?


Lil puzzling is it's reason
someone once lived there
may be till گزشتہ season
she was my heart's only heir

though she is long gone
my heart...
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(The Chipettes went out of class to the bus stop)

Brittany:You know what?I think we'll go to school سے طرف کی car tomorrow.

Jeanette:Sure.We can take the black car.

(At their house)

Eleanor:Home Sweet Home.

Jeanette:It's already 6:00.We should make رات کے کھانے, شام کا کھانا with mac and cheese.

Brittany:Cool.And I'll make milkshakes.I'll make vanilla,choclate and strawberry.

Jeanette:Dinner is served.

Eleanor:Wow,Jeanette!Your mac and cheese is awesome!!!And آپ Brittany,you make the best milkshakes!

Brittany and Jeanette:Thanks.And آپ make the best pastries ,cakes and cookies.

Eleanor:Thanks.I'll always help my girls.

(At 9:00)...
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This was my first fanfic, I've been posting this story on my spot, but I want to see what some different شائقین think of it.I only have 3 یا 4 who actually read it so I'm not sure....please please comment.I need your opinion and If I'm bad just tell me, kay?

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Painful Memories
Chapter One



I was sitting at my vanity. I started brushing my long golden waves. I was preparing myself. I knew Edward would be ہوم soon. Charlie had Edward leave every night at a certain time. Of course Edward would just go back once Charlie was asleep. He chose to go to...
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