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 if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
Danny:

I grabbed my گلابی and green duffel bag off the wooden shelf beside my green bed.

I was inside the earth elemental درخت house where all the earth elementals sleep if they are staying in the BOES over night. Marcus, Brenna, and I were supposed to be sleeping but we all weren't. We were running out to go find Janie. We weren't supposed to leave.

After pulling on skinny jeans and a green Nike شرٹ, قمیض I was ready. I woke up Marcus after I had pulled on my brown converse and jacket.

"wha....what is it Danny?" He asked impatiently while rubbing his eyes. I ruffled his black hair.

"Get up meat head we're going. And be quiet. آپ don't want Trixi waking up and hearing us." I pointed at the بستر سے طرف کی the window where Trixi snored.

He nodded and got up to change in the boy's room. I went to wake up Brenna where I found her already out on the ground with her bag strapped over one shoulder.

"Hurry up slow pokes!!" She whispered. Yea she's an early riser. She wakes up the منٹ the sun begins to rise. It's her element. Still the sun wasn't all the way up yet.

I giggled and went back in for Marcus. We slowly climbed down the ladder and saw Brenna and her red curls.

After we jumped over boundary between the real world and the valley Marcus pushed us into a tree.

"Marcus!!" I کہا frustrated. "The درخت says that pushing us into it isn't a very good wake up call."

"Sorry.." He whispered. "I sensed someone close by, like someone is following us."

"Did the earth tell you?" I کہا jokingly.

He gave me an annoyed look. "Yes, it did for your information. Any way آپ just talked to the tree."

I stared back.

After about 5 سیکنڈ Marcus let go of me and Brenna. We began walking again until Marcus pushed us into a green bush.

"What was that for?!" Brenna yelled at him. Marcus put a finger to her lips to shush her.

"I heard him again."

I sighed. "Are آپ sure it's a 'him'?" I asked.

"Yes. He's hot."

"Ugh....." awkward. Brenna and I stared at each other. Marcus DID NOT get the memo.

"OH!!!!! No no no I didn't mean it that way I meant like he is burning as in hot! Like his aura is like a fire!"

"Okay that explains it. Now will آپ get off of me?" I cried. I freeked and jumped up.

"Wait we may have to-" But we already knew what he was going to say.

A tall boy with blond hair and a tan muscular body of about 14 chucked a آگ کے, آگ ball at Marcus. The boy looked like he was a والی بال player from California. آپ know that kind.

He jumped up and sent a path of burning flame towards Marcus's bare feet. (you know, earth elemental)

I screamed and sent a twig to et the burn. Marcus winked at me and sent a charging rock at the boy.

Brenna couldn't do anything, there was no sunlight. Frantically, I sent her up to the سب, سب سے اوپر of the درخت and ran behind the boy.

As I slid behind him I turned and found my self a raging grizzly bear. My animal.

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Janie:

A small tear slid down my cheek. I couldn't believe I did that. I had left my family. I knew being there was the key to my survival. Why wouldn't I want to be with them? Learn their ancient secret?

Honestly, I had a feeling this wasn't going to happen to anyone. Finding out you're half بھیڑیا half human. یا that آپ can control one of the elements.

I remembered the times when Danny and I were little. The times when In the summer I would come to her house and play in the water. I could stay in there for hours and never get cold. Danny and I would pretend to be princesses in distress. We would pretend to drown while Danny's dad would play and come save us.

I remembered the دن we bought Daisy. That cute little puppy. I remember how we would make لیمونیڈ, لمنڈ stands so we could go to build-a-bear and buy an animal. I bought a white wolf.

I turned off the iced road and walked through a dark ally. My house is in that kind of area of town. The one where all the robbery happen. I was a block away from my house now. Several times I heard a whisper in my head to turn back and go to Danny. To say I loved her and that I was sorry. I didn't.

I heard a dog bark behind me. I heard a woman scream. I even seemed to hear a woman water her plants in the middle of winter. Ever since I enter through that قلعہ back at BOES I had gotten better senses. Better strength. I seemed to have better reflexes as well.

I kicked a بیئر bottle away from my path into the snow. It was late. I had been walking for hours. It was probably 3 a.m. سے طرف کی now.

Suddenly I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around...but no one was there. Ignoring it I flipped my brown hair out of my face and kept walking. I heard it again. Turning I found no one. But I did see tracks in the snow. And they weren't mine. They were a goat's hoof prints.

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Danny:

After we had tied up the boy with my vines and I was back to human form we had a meeting. WE dragged the boy out to the main rode and decided to ask him who he was.

"who are?" Brenna asked with her hand on her hip.

"What's it to you? I probably shouldn't tell you, besides, آپ did attack me." He seemed strong. But I noticed a hint of fear in his voice.

Marcus laughed. "Us attack you? You're the one who chucked a آگ کے, آگ ball at me!"

"Ahhh....true."

I laughed. "I don't think you're dangerous. I'm Danny Brown, Daniella Brown actually." Brenna slapped my hand. I rolled my eyes.

"I'm Marcus Lee, and I see your a آگ کے, آگ elemental. I'm earth elemental." Marcus کہا while eying me.

He smiled. "You guys are like me. I already knew though. I'm Kyle Shivoni. I'm looking for my Dad."

"We're looking for our friend. She's...." But I stopped Marcus. We couldn't trust this guy. He could be a follower of Laman. If we told him there was now a ice بھیڑیا shape shifter...we would be in deep doodoo.

"We are looking for our friend. She is....a..." I had to make an excuse. "She is a water elemental."

Marcus nodded at me. Good excuse was what his face said.

"That's cool. Do آپ think آپ could let me go?" He asked with eagerness in his eyes.

I looked at Brenna. "I don't think we can still trust you." she said. "But we will let آپ travel with us. And we will unbind you." She walked over to him and untied his vine binds.

"WHAT!!!???" I کہا in astonishment. I thought we WEREN'T going to trust him!! So آپ unbind him and let him travel with us?

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Janie:

I screamed at the touch of his ice cold hands. And I don't get cold. They were raspy and weird. the touch of them on my shoulder made me jump and scream. I turned around to see who he was. No one was there. After I turned around again I-


"AAAAAAHHHHH!!!" I screamed. I was face to face with a man with dark red eyes, long black hair, a scrunched up face, a long freaky scar draped across his cheek, and a long pointed nose.

I knew who he was. As he spoke his toung was a Snake's slithered strip of flesh that always scares me. I don't think آپ can really call it a snake's toung though.

"Who....are...you?" I whispered in a scared voice. His hot breathe smelled of gasoline which was odd.

After a moment of his red eyes glaring into mine he answered. "I'm Laman. آپ should know that سے طرف کی now."

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posted by para-scence
One day, I was watching the news. The stories presented on there were terrible. Death, crime, death, tragedy, death, hardship, death... It almost literally broke my heart.

"Oh, that's terrible," Mrs. Stueck sighed. I bit my lip. One سوال was still boiling in my mind. I took a deep breath.

"What happened," I squeaked. She stopped and looked at me.

"Excuse me?" she asked, confused. I took a deep breath.

"Averil," I said. She paused for a moment, and sighed sadly.

"She had a brain tumor. She died two years ago."

"Oh," I said. "S-s-sorry," I کہا awkwardly. I didn't know what else to say.

"That's...
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
I.    Book Title.
A.    Alice unknown
II.    Do آپ plan on writing مزید books?
A.    Yes. I would like to write a sequel to Alice Unknown.
B.    I wanted Alice Unknown to be longer too.
C.    Also I would like my اگلے to be مزید dramatic.
D.    I have a 35 chapter book online too.
E.    And some anime.
III.    Any advice to anyone who wants to do something like this?
A.    Follow your dreams.
B.    Don’t...
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posted by twilight_23
This is a pesonal narrative I had to write for my English class. I love feedback, anything آپ have to say is appreciated. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, punctuation), please tell me so I can fix them, thanks:D


As I was thinking of experienes that changed my life, my mind automatically went back to my time at St. Anthony. I skimmed throught the years starting with eigth grade, thinking that was where I would find a significant event since it was where I have my most حالیہ memories. To my surprise, I found nothing. I moved on to younger grade levels, still finding little....
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posted by joe-edwardfan
 i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!
i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!
ارے guys!
first of all i wanted to thank آپ all for the support over the 21 chaps.
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second of all some of آپ asked me if edward and bella got back together? thats a yes too.
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and i wanted to tell آپ that im gonna start a new story!(yay im so happy! im really getting addicted to fanpop)
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so im gonna give آپ some names آپ should pick one!(each name has a different story there not the same)
and im going to write my new story (the name most of u picked)
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so dont forget to tell me this really is important to me
so here are the names:

1.broken heart...
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Darkest light, brightest sight
Midnight sky, Nyx's day
That navy ribbon shall lead the way
Full moon, Selene's sun
It soon shall be the only one...

heres another one

No red,
No yellow,
No blue,
No white,
Nature is gone,
The flowers are dead,
There be no مزید light,
Black!
Everywhere around.
Scream!
There is no other sound.
All is lost.

And then another:

Fly,
So high,
HIgh as the sky,
Into seeping blackness.
No light is upon us,
And nothing is ever clear.
Diamond bright,
Beauty in there eyes,
The stars are alive.

AND THEN ANOTHER!!!!

Midnight sky,
Burning ice,
No more, no more, no more,
Say it thrice.
Light will be engulfed in a black haze.
We have gone through the Council's faze.

BLOODY HELL!!!!!!
what yu think it means?
yu think its a prophesy?
idk! HELP!!!! i sometimes write poems in my sleep!! i dont memba riting them but they in my handwriting!! TELL ME WHAT IS HAPPENING!!!!
posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

Four months. Four agonizing months since I had seen her in the park. Four agonizing months of starting to dial her number, and then stopping myself.

I am listening to the middle aged woman complain about her life. She doesn't even need a therapist.

I will the clock to اقدام faster. My office is dark, modern, and devoid of warmth. Ironically, it fits me.

Thankfully, the session is over. I tell Amamda that she's made progress, اگلے week, and it's been a pleasure. Notice the lie. I glance down at the ڈیسک calender, and look up 2:30.

I don't get a chance to see who is scheduled next, because...
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posted by Slinkywaffle
Tides
The sky was a canvas painted with pastels. Just before the sun truly کہا goodbye, it hung in the sky. Her eyes sparkled and her hair shinned with the last light of day. Salt water filled her lungs as she took a deep breath. Sand began to cave in on her feet when she tried to اقدام them from where they were. She stared once مزید at the now deserted ساحل سمندر, بیچ and thought, maybe a little longer? But no, she couldn’t. She was too good to break her parent’s curfew, and with the first دن of school nearing, she knew she needed a good nights sleep. She slowly brought herself to her feet and grabbed...
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posted by -SilverFey-
I found my bond early.

Not exceptionally early. In eighth grade. I was thirteen; he was barely fourteen. And a matching mark appeared on our skin, meaning that he was my bond. He is my bond.

Our mark is made up of three dark black stars, charcoal black, pure black. The first one, the biggest star, is on both of our left breastbones, the سیکنڈ largest just under it and slightly to the left, and the smallest just a little lower down, directly under the first.

This year, tenth grade, I showed my mark to my teacher, Ms. Satari. She کہا since it depicts something that exists only out of this world,...
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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#1]

Number one description:

Okay so I'm this chapter it will be talking about the lives of the characters. So آپ can get a bit of background before I get to the true part of the story!!!! 😊

Love,

Liviabutterfly
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Olivia jones:

Olivia is a girl that lives with 5 other siblings, she's the youngest. Olivia is 16 and has 5 older brothers, Oliver, Owen, Oscar, Olly, and Omar. They live in a happy ہوم down near the beach, so they Jones family's پسندیدہ thing to do is go on a boardwalk, swimming, laying out in the sun, collecting...
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posted by vanelandsisters
By: Sonikku J. Aleena, Manikku J. Aleena, and Salamina Q. Acorn

Chapter 1
(Sonic's POV)
Two in the morning, I'm woken up سے طرف کی Dad and Stepmom. "Sonic, honey." She whispers to me. I sit up and look at her. "Yeah, what's up?" "Your father and I have to go on another business trip. Can آپ please tell Sonia that we'd like it if she could be in charge?" I nod, yawn, and hug them 'bye'. I eventually take out my 3DS and play one of my games on it. I'll say about three/four hours pass when I hear the front doors open. "Mom doesn't live here anymore," I think. "She lives at the hospital, and Dad and Stepmom...
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posted by Tia4
Most Irritating Moments
- Morning Alarm
Most Difficult Task
- To find Socks
Most Dreadful Journey
- Way to Class
Most Lovely Time
- Meeting Friends
Most Tragic Moments
- Surprise Test in 1st Period
Most Wonderful News
- TEACHER IS ABSENT

Maybe this happens with everyone.Nobody likes school life but it get interesting with our دوستوں playing tricks with others,not doing homework,tests ect.We learn lots of things from school and we doesn't know how time get pass spending time with our friends.
It's fun.
posted by jedigirl
D-Jumper Ch 2
"Ms. Sumter! Are آپ going to شامل میں us?" I'm jolted back to reality سے طرف کی my English teacher.
"Yes. Sorry Sir." I apologize sheepishly. I hear a few snickers from my classmates. I hated this class so much.
I feel my phone buzz, and discreetly take a look. It was from Rocky, my best friend.

Hey, r u ok? U look out of it.

I look up at her and nod my head.
"Ms. Sumter! Pay attention. I will not tell آپ again!" Mr. Houseon scolded.
"Sorry," I apologize again. I give Rocky an accusatory look. She smiles in response. I sit and look at Mr. Houseon, not actually listening. My vision started to...
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Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something آپ don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, مزید than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope آپ like it!
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Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn....
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posted by MineTurtle
Just to let آپ know, this is NOT mine. I found it on another website.

My Child,

You may not know me, but I know everything about you. Psalm 139:1

I know when آپ sit down and when آپ rise up. Psalm 139:2

I am familiar with all your ways. Psalm 139:3

Even the very hairs on your head are numbered.
Matthew 10:29-31

For آپ were made in my image. Genesis 1:27

In me آپ live and اقدام and have your being. Acts 17:28

For آپ are my offspring. Acts 17:28

I knew آپ even before آپ were conceived. Jeremiah 1:4-5

I chose آپ when I planned creation. Ephesians 1:11-12

You were not a mistake, for all your days are...
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posted by malmcd
Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there آپ have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same دل strings as آپ and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep آپ apart from one another...But what if my one true love isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him یا her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first دن of spring, March 20, 1998. And was born...
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Water
My only escape
Where for once my arms that are too pale and scrawny bend perfectly
Where I feel perfect
This is where my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
Where my legs that are too chubby یا fat kick so strong
I feel perfect
This is the place my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
Where pain only makes me only go faster
Better
Prettier
Perfectly

Water
Where my face that's not pretty in never seen
Hidden in waves that make me feel free
This is the place my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
When I used to stab myself with needles
And let the blood bleed out
Suddenly is the last thing on my mind
And when I do spill blood
It's only on the days my mom says I can't go
To the water
Where my spirit will stay
When my body grows old and dies away
posted by alliXcobber
Chapter Two
Jessica lounged on سب, سب سے اوپر of the Walgreen’s cash register counter.
    “So, do آپ even know what your’e going to do about your dad thing?”
    “Obviously, I’m doing just fine. I can live سے طرف کی myself until I turn 18,” Samantha told her, agitated that she was asking that stupid سوال again
    “You do know thats, like, illegal right?” Jessica countered in her annoying teenage girl accent.
    “Since when do people here care what’s legal یا not?”
Jessica merely shrugged in response, they...
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posted by thetscfan121
"We're going camping!" Solimar کہا to her friends. Everybody cheered and were very excited...well, everyone, except Pamela and Sergio. "We're leaving in two days to MonteNegro, and we're staying there for at least a week. Any questions?" Pamela raised her hand. "Are we living together for a whole week?" "Yes, Pamela, we are. My parents are going to borrow us a trailer, so whoever doesn't like to sleep in a tent can go sleep there. Anyone else?" No one else raised their hand. "Good. See ya'll on Sunday!" Solimar got up from the BK میز, جدول and left., like everyone else except Edgardo, who had...
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posted by Insight357
Revealed when called upon
Permitting the dagger to
Deliver steely truths
Who does it hurt the most,
The victim یا the killer?
Sacrificed knowledge comes with damnation
You’ll be in hell before knowing this
Blessed سے طرف کی curiosity
Cursed with wicked hate

Speaking words shaper than glass
Not cushions to lay upon
Take the cruelty and use it for your benefit
Or shun the blinded wisdom
Refuse to accept any of the words
Too much experience for fifteen
Too much madness from simply looking
Deny this as آپ always have
Repetition will be my death
In a vain attempt
Prayer for an ear
A privilege of being a friend
Staying...
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