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posted by Insight357

I sat on a black, leather couch, starring at the deep blue walls. I was in Alexander’s office, for my appointment. I’d come here straight from the cathedral. My hair was tangled, and messy. I still wore plaid pajama bottoms, and an old, gray tee shirt.
    I came to a realization last night. Today, I would make my move. I have done enough to hold my own. Now I could be happy…Maybe.
    I debated whether, یا not I should tell Alexander about Lucy. Dr. Anozi would’ve liked the idea, but I’m not sure about Dr. Laveney.
    I also...

Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 16

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 16

A loud noise woke Bone from his sleep. Becoming مزید alert he felt a sharp pain in his neck from laying his head over after falling asleep on his دکان couch.
Opening one dry eye he could see Jax rustling around the دکان benches and he appeared to have his shotgun strapped to his back and somehow he got some old work boots over his injured foot.
He looked like he was prepared for battle.
“The hell آپ doin’ preparin’ for war?” he said.
“No, goin’ huntin’. Koda hunting”
Bone was wide awake now.
“You are not going to kill my nephew,” he کہا forcefully stopping Jax in...

Fairy Tale Chapter 1

posted by bunnibunnibaby

Jade Adams was making her way ہوم when she saw him. The dark haired kid everyone had been talking about earlier today was walking in the same direction she was. "Hey! You're the new kid in school right?" "Hn?" The boy turned around to face Jade, making her دل skip a beat. He had to be one of the most strikingly beautiful people she had ever seen. He was pale, with onyx colored eyes, and jet black hair that hung over his eyes slightly. "H-hi. I'm Jade..." the poor girl was at a loss for words when he flashed his dazzling smile at her. "Hey, I'm Victor." She blushed slightly and readjusted her Slipknot tee over her black skinny jeans. "Soo... what road do آپ turn onto to get home?" "I turn onto Salem road, what about you?" Victor looked over at her again, scratching his head awkwardly. "Me too! Wanna walk ہوم together?" "Sure!" The blonde girl started walking ahead, leaving Victor o follow. "So, how do آپ like it here?"

Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 11

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 11

The dry hot air inside the گیراج was almost unbearable and the smell of motor oil and tires wasn’t helping. Bone usually did not drink a can of بیئر while in his دکان but there were no customers and it was just too damn hot to do anything.

Dropping himself onto his دکان سوفی, لٹانا and cracked open his Miller Light; he closed his eyes to try and ignore the stuffy heat.
He remembered calling Koda’s house and left a message when no one answered. It was odd for no one to be ہوم but he shrugged it off.
Taking a long swig he didn’t realize how tired he felt from the heat as he started to...

After Death chapter one

posted by Claudia4599

    We had been training for this moment since the apocalypse.

    Two years پہلے a killer disease criss crossed the world. This disease killed people almost instantly. The people who were diagnosed died in a few horribly painful hours. Only a handful people survived. My twin sister, Victoria and I were one of those few people. Sadly, even our parents died of this disease. We were only twelve when it happened and I remember our parents begging on their deathbeds that we get the vaccine. The doctors would only give us the vaccine, not our parents.

    We...

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Love is Wild: Chapter 15

posted by sawfan13

The man quietly entered the apartment of his girlfriend. He so badly wanted her back into his arms. His obsession. His love. His target. He entered her bedroom, as she rested in. He crept over to her, stroking her long black hair as she slept. A shadow that was not his appeared. He backed away from the woman, as the shadow was a man. A man with dark wild hair. A man that growled like a lion, but yet somewhat like a wolf.

Someone came in. He was touching Lilith. I walked over to him. I looked at him and said,"What are آپ doing here? Leave my queen alone." "Look, man. I don't want any trouble....

Hell's Outlaw - Chapter 7

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 7

Koda awoke suddenly.
His دل was hammering in his chest and an excruciating pain filled his body.
His skin felt as if it was ripping open, his muscles were in so much pain as if he pulled every muscle fiber.
The skin and bones in his fingertips exploded as something else grew in replacement of his nails.
His jawbone crunched and popped.

Everything in his body was changing.

As he tried to maintain his thoughts, he slowly lost all memory of who he was. He was becoming مزید animal than human.

The pain finally subsided.
All he thought and felt was anger.
And revenge.

Jax sat alone in the living...

Hell's Outlaw - Chapter 5

posted by HouseMindFreak

1st chapter: link

2nd chapter: link

3rd chapter: link

4th chapter: link

Chapter 5

Koda rode through the desert for what seemed like hours. The sun was starting to set in the West, making the sky bright مالٹا, نارنگی and pink. If he wasn’t so worked up over everything he would stop to enjoy the sunset but his mind was too preoccupied.

The wind started to get chilly and sky was getting darker so he decided he’d gone far enough and should stop for a rest.
Standing سے طرف کی his bike he scanned the landscape looking for anything that could be used as shelter. The landscape was mostly dirt and weeds, nothing to...

Are We Right For Eachother Chapter 7

posted by jacob_lover5253

I really thought he was going to kiss me. Boy, was I wrong. I swear he was moving closer and closer but then suddenly he was on his feet pulling me up. I frowned but then put on a fake smile so he wouldn’t realize. ‘I really liked him but if I told him…’ I sighed as I thought to myself. We picked our stuff back up and I slipped hos shoes on and he didn’t complain. Nick carried my شرٹ, قمیض and shorts and handed me his short to throw on over my bathing suit. I smiled and gratefully put it on.

My mind was racing. Racing fast. Did he really just give me his shirt!? I wanted to jump up and...

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Dangerous Love Chapter Three

posted by M169

"He was soooo cute!" I told my firends. sad thing is, I can't even remember what he looks like. But something feels special about him. Something makes me feel like I shouldn't care....

I would never of thought I'd be waiting سے طرف کی the phone. Most of the time i just think "Well if a guy doesn't want this, he can't have it." But something is amking me feel like I want him مزید than anyone else. Something is drawing me towards him. something makes me feel like if anyone's دل will be broken it'll be mine. And I just met him! Wait....I don't even know his name!

While Luna was worried about that....

The Funny Thing About Bad Boys..... [part 1]

posted by Jamie105

The familiar obnoxious ring tone woke me up that morning. I was still groggy when I managed to slam my hand on it and grab it like a claw like in those games in the arcades.
"Hello?" I mumbled.
"Jamie, do آپ know what دن it is?" My best friend Delilah asked anxiously on the other line. It sounded like I forgot something like I always did..
"Ummm Saturday?" I asked, not quite sure what was going on.
"Very funny, it's the total drama island cast auditions today HELLOO!!"
"That's today?!?!"
I shot out of bed, turing my phone's speaker on to catch the words, "They're allowing eight new teens into...

Learning the Truth: Chapter 2 : New Friends?

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

Part 1

Alexis walked side سے طرف کی side withElyon, who had been waiting patiently outside the door for her to get ready. Her shoes slapped off the ground and her long pinifor swayed سے طرف کی her knees, she wrapped her long arms around her upper body feeling the chill of the large building.
"You will get used to it," Elyon murmered peering in the classroom as they past them."It's normlly warmer at night, but thats in the main building, not here I'm afraid," she saidrubbing at her own goosebumps. "We arent alloeed to wear anything else butthe uniform, against pollicy...though they get to wear-" she stopped...

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Learning the truth. Chapter 1: First days.

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

Okay so I am really bored, so I thought I would develop this wierd dream I have been having.

One mind can change the world, one life can save another. One girl will save us all. This is the prophecy we were دیا long ago, and this is the story of the Girl it belongs to.

She sat on a large دیوار that was high enough to overlook the park on the other side of it, her legs swung freely and her hands sat crossed on her lap. It was the middle of summer and all the other teenagers and children were in the large park, enjoying the hot sun.But the girl stayed were she was, smiling at the fun that evryone...

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Finding Love : Intro and Chapter One : Part One , Casey's Story

posted by dancing_banana

Introduction

Matthew

Her eyes hypnotize me, and I’m completely hooked on her smile. Who knew she’d be the girl I would fall for? I’ve fallen completely in love with her. It’s hard to imagine her in someone else’s arms. I’m admitting to myself now, that I’m in love with Casey, and that I’m extremely jealous of Carl.

Casey

I love how golden his hair is, I love how I could just spend forever in his eyes, I think I could even love him? He’s beautiful and travels in a completely different social circle, and yet he’s standing here becoming the light of my life. I’m trying to wrap...

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Vampire Diaries

posted by mitchie19

I got bored in the laptop so I opened MS Word and start typing whatever. Then I come to this.
Plus I like writing stories, so enjoy.
Note: Fan-made

I woke up in the middle of the night, feeling heavy and uneasy.
My mind rushed through the memories. I pushed myself back to sleep not remembering any parts happened earlier. Bonnie. Bonnie, I thought. She had been killed سے طرف کی Katherine. Oh, God. She can’t be! She can’t be dead! My fingers harden the تکیا so I could hardly breathe. I felt moisture rushing to the surface of my eyes. I shouted, nor pouted. Though, no one can here me. Jeremy’s out...

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If you've ever wanted wings read this

posted by vlad_todd_fan

My name is Michael Gavin I'm 14 live in Upland CA, and I have wings. I'm not exactly sure how it happened but it did. My childhood was normal, like really normal no wings at that time and I was popular-ish. Until, I hit puberty as my mom says my dad was killed in a car accident and it was just me and mom. Then things got weird I was hit سے طرف کی a car and was sent to the hospital obviously. I spent two months in that little white room, reading my Percy Jackson books, completely unaware of what the nurses were talking about outside my door as I read The Last Olympian for the zillionth time. My mom...

تاریخ Night*sequel to prom night*(Chapter Three:Dinner Time Trauma)

posted by moolah

تاریخ Night *sequel*
Chapter Three: رات کے کھانے, شام کا کھانا Time Trauma
By: moolah
Haley groaned as she heard knocking on the back window. She was on سب, سب سے اوپر and barely had her bra and undies کے, undies on. She quickly pecked Sean on the cheek and put on her yellow tunic on. She put on her gray skinny jeans on then. She ran her hand threw her hair and hopped out of the car. Luke was standing there in his clothes with Ian on his hip. “Are آپ guys doing something I shouldn’t know about?” Haley smiled and said, “Yeah, probably. Now, what is it?” Luke raised his left eyebrow and کہا simply,...

Primrose High: Chapter two, A New school سال

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

HIII I KNOW KNOW ONE READS THESE, BUT I LIKE WRITING THEM =) SOOO HERE WE GO.

Mr Grey took us down a big endless corridoor, where our dorms would be.
"Boys one this side, girls on the other. At this school we believe that closeness brings power, so آپ will both be sharing dorms, with three other students. Of your own sex of course.,"he stopped at one of the doors, the girl side."Ahhh, this will be your dorm Miss Stirling,". I looked at the door, there was a shiny number pate on it, 912. "The students have a دن off today, so it should give آپ enough time to learn your timetable," he clicked...

Camp Deluca

posted by lindizzle215

Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to our family camp that we help with every year, we still do but were all teenagers so were counselors now.

"Cam lets go I want to get there at a desist hour." Joey said
"Fine, I'll be there in a minute." I کہا back while sitting on my suit case tiring to zip it up.
"Need some help?" Duke asked leaning against the door frame.
"Yes, please." I کہا
He came over, zipped my bags up and took some down stairs. I grabbed my other bags and ran down stairs. I put my bags down and کہا goodbye to everyone and that I would see them all in a few days....

[Poem] Too Dark

posted by HarryPLover

Its too dark
Too dark to see what is going on
Tripping over the couch
Slamming into the wall
stepping on the remote
It was too dark
The undone dishes
The scattered roses
The broken picture
My broken heart
It was too dark
Believing it would change
That he would change
A Waste
A waste of my time
My Effort
The “No Messages” left on my phone
It was too dark
It was too dark to see what had happened
Too dark to try to fix things
Its just too dark
Someone turn on the light
That light bulb in my head of what Ive done wrong
Its too dark