i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
آپ were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house یا fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
آپ did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
آپ کہا your chance at love had past آپ سے طرف کی
i told i'm here so dont آپ cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
آپ were like my juliet and i your romeo
آپ love me i love آپ thats all i need to know
no longer will آپ dream of love thats true
no longer will i wander my تلاش has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd love some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
آپ are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as آپ lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are دل at name.
آپ may notice that only the سیکنڈ verse rhymes, this is an attempt to دکھائیں the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
آپ are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as آپ lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are دل at name.
آپ may notice that only the سیکنڈ verse rhymes, this is an attempt to دکھائیں the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
