Sonic پرستار Characters Article: AN EXAMPLE OF A MARY-SUE

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posted by gyrothehedgehog

NAME: مالٹا, نارنگی the Hedgehog
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An مالٹا, نارنگی hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was destroyed سے طرف کی Eggman so now he wants revenge on him
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker مالٹا, نارنگی and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange

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Nightmares Part 4

posted by Dragonfruit44

Rose stared at Nat in disbelief. "What?!" She said. Nat sighed, " I've had these dreams lately, just suddenly coming to me. It was about me wondering into the woods and I kept hearing a voice. I followed it to this hole, where I was pushed in and while I was falling, I saw two dark figures looking down at me. One of them was your brother." They all stared, then Flare looked into the hole. It looked as if it was a bottomless pit. "Rose my brother is down there? Why would he go down there?" Nat got up and walked to the hole. " There's only one way to find out. We have to take our chances and...

Nightmares Part 2

posted by Dragonfruit44

Nat finished making some eggs and بیکن when Flare woke up. "Good Morning. Did آپ sleep well?" Nat asked, getting her a plate. "I slept like a baby! How about you?" Flare answered, digging into her breakfast. "Not one of my best sleeps, but I'll pull through the day." Nat answered then yawned. She got herself a plate and sat سے طرف کی Flare. "Did آپ have any dreams? I had a strange one about going to the public pool and then ending up in the ocean and finding treasure. Very strange." Flare said. " Nothing interesting, I'm sure of that." Nat said, uneasily. Flare seemed to notice. " You're lying....

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Nightmares Part 1

posted by Dragonfruit44

Nat was walking to The Speed Demon, The restaurant she and her mother worked at. She was carrying many groceries for the food they needed to prepare. She was about to open the restaurant when she heard someone calling her. She looked around, but no one was there. A thick fog was starting to come down the street. " Hello? Is someone there?" She called, but no answer. The fog was in front of her now, and she couldn't even see a foot in front of her face. She went for the door, but it was gone and she was touching a tree.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I سے طرف کی a tree? She went to put the...

The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11

posted by mephiles97

The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11

Kyle released a quiet groan as he slowly began waking up from the effects of the tranquil dart that he had been hit with. He struggled to open his eyes as his stamina very slowly began returning to him. He finally did manage to open his eyes, struggling to focus his blurry vision on his surroundings. He was sure that he had been captured سے طرف کی the Dark Horses.

Finally managing to get his eyes to focus, Kyle slowly moved his head around to observe where he was. He was in a fairly large cell made of solid concrete, so they would most likely be very sturdy. Since he was...

Matt The Lynx(A New Beginning):Episode two

posted by Mapware3640

So the small city-like village of Crystal city was in a bind,with the greedy tyrant Bubba closing in to take all the folks prisoner,the people of Crystal city worked like clockwork to retrieve the gems from the caverns in order to pay off the bill.However all the gems were incinerated due to the heat surrounding the smoldering remains of MTL's pod,The villagers quickly gathered everything and brought it to Bubba,however it didn't meet the proper amount,Angered سے طرف کی this,Bubba shouted "Cheapskates!I was generous enough to give آپ vermin the عنوان of this land and آپ try to trick me out of it!?You...

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Conflicts Arcane (Reboot) chapter One Part Two (FINALLY!!!!!)

posted by TakTheFox

Part Two “Problematic Circumstances”

Talon slowly opened his eyes. He was weary and dizzy. “What… wh-where?” He slowly turned his head and pushed himself upward to get a better look at his surroundings. He was in a metal room… with a locked door… one light… and one bed… a cell? He was in prison?

“How did I get here?!” Talon jerked to his feet and yanked at the door handle; obviously it would not open, but why not try anyway?

“Wait a second…” Nick closed his eyes and concentrated on what happened before this. “There was the… fire… then I was taken سے طرف کی the cops!...

My personal regrets and praise during the creation of the original MTL series.

posted by Mapware3640

Heh,I bet آپ didn't think I was going to write this,huh.XD

Okay...time for the shit storm of shit storms.The original MTL series...oh dear lord,where to begin?Well the creation of my original پرستار character was no easy feat,Back when I created my FC I never understood the concept of Gary-stus and Mary-Sues(Until mephs pointed out sometime later),but where to begin...I suppose let's get the easy part of this مضمون out of the way,My regrets and mistakes with the original series.First regret...cliche back story.Again,long before I knew anything about cliches I decide to give MTL a back-story...

Sonic پرستار Character Romance Q’s

posted by TakTheFox

Note: If your character is already in a relationship, آپ can still answer, but pretend they aren’t. And do NOT just describe their current boyfriend/girlfriend for all the تفصیل parts unless they actually have the wanted traits.

1.    Describe your character in five words.
2.    Is your character looking for love?
3.    Would they rather stay single?
4.    What is the name of the first male/female that your character knows that comes to mind? (THE TRUTH)
5.    Does your character want an...

"The Missing" Part 1 - The Beginning

posted by RawrMonster123

(This is the new پرستار fiction I made the answer for.)

"RING RING! RING RING!" the phone rung that morning.

The young 22-year-old in the بستر besides where the phone was rose up, yawning and stretching. She looked at her alarm clock. It read "3:00am". "Why are people calling this early..?" the young adult thought. She sleepily tried turned the light on from lamp and tried to grab the phone.

Finally getting it's grasp, she pressed the talk button and put it up to her ear. "Hello?"

"Is this Cassandra?" the person, who sounded rather professional, on the other line asked.

"It's Casey.. And may I help...

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My Opinion on Stolen Art and Recolors

posted by RawrMonster123

One question: Why do آپ do it?

Well your answer is probably "I can't draw!" آپ know why آپ can't draw? Because آپ never picked up a pooping piece of paper and pencil and actually tried to! So now, kids, I'm gonna teach آپ a little lesson about art:

RECOLORING AND STEALING ART AREN'T COOL! IT'S FOR NONCREATIVE PEOPLE!

You know, good drawers weren't born as good drawers. If آپ believe that, you're sadly mistaken. آپ know how they became good drawers? سے طرف کی actually drawing!

Also, آپ can get arrested when آپ steal people's art. Really.

Now, just grab a paper, grab a pencil, get your pencil...

A Dark Story, a Dark Hedgehog. (1)

posted by Shadey_Grey

Shadey: Ok I got bored... so I start now.
Thorn: But آپ کہا اگلے Saturday!
Shadey: Yeah... I know but I'm bored so... shut it! Now begin

(Rooftops 11:47 p.m.)
"The night is wonderful... sigh... why does it have to end? Why does everything have a story?" A grey hedgehog thinks to herself. "Of course why is it my problem? I'm Shadey Grey! The last dark user... nothing is darker than me!" Shadey chuckles to herself. She jumps off the roof and wanders through the city. She messes with her black limiter rings and smiles and walks home.

(Shadey's mansion 12:26 a.m.)
Shadey takes off her black jacket...

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Character Romance Crossovers Do’s and Don’ts

posted by TakTheFox

Picture this,
You just found this new roleplay called (for lack of imagination) “Roleplay of love, brought to آپ سے طرف کی Hormones”. And because romance roleplays are so مقبول (HORMONES!) آپ try it out. So your character falls in love یا whatever with another character. At the end they are either…
A. A couple
Or B. an item.
So now you’re all like “Cool. Now my character has a love-interest.” So every time آپ rp with those two characters in mind, you’re lead on to think that your character is the love-interest, only to find out that when آپ make a اقدام like proposing,...

Who is Relm?

posted by TakTheFox

Who is Relm?

Relm, as I’ve stated, is a banshee. Not just any banshee though. Relm is a DARICHA Banshee. Daricha stands for “Moonlight” یا “Darkness”. So basically Relm is a DARK Banshee.

Relm comes from a future-mobius-timeline AFTER the Identity Wars, and first appears in Mobius Academy: Evolution. Before that she came from three Mobiuses. Mobocan, Nicous (the future Identity-world), and Ryft’s Mobius. She lived there for about ten years before coming to Mobius Academy #2, seeing how she heard so much about its predecessor.

Personality-wise, in a word, Relm is… graceful. Pardon...

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Sonic پرستار Character youtuber needed

posted by TakTheFox

(Note: I wrote this on the fly, and on Windows Movie Maker, but the stupid text kept messing up so I couldn't make it a video)

So from what I've seen, of the
many fan-based franchises, the
largest, یا one of the largest
(please don't hurt me if I'm
wrong) is the Sonic the
hedgehog پرستار Character
franchises.
On the site I'm usually on,
Fanpop, the Sonic پرستار
Character club is HUGE, and
has tons of great پرستار
characters...

... so I just can't help but wish
there'd be someone out there
who is a devoted Sonic پرستار and
can make QUALITY videos, who
could make ویڈیوز FOR the پرستار
characters.
Now I know there...

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100 things I like about this club.

posted by MephilesTheDark

This, like my '100 things I hate about this club' is completely opinionated and such. This time, flames will be used to roast the flamers own flesh. (Not that I expect much of that, because this is LUL OPTOMISTICCCC HURRDEDURR.)

1. This won't get HALF the awesome response I got for it's brother article.
2. So many roleplays to choose from.
3. There are some awesome character designs.
4. The 'community' feel.
5. Religion is usually unimportant.
6. Lack of republicans. (Or at least obnoxious ones.)
7. The fact that the only reason I even know what a republican is is because someone from here taught...

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Playful گلابی Eyes: WHAT IS UP WITH THIS GIRL!?

posted by TakTheFox

Basically this is a quick guide to what is up with the identity in the Playful گلابی Eyes roleplay.

PPE (The default name) is a new type of identity I came up with called an Emote, which is self-explanatory but still I will explain.
Emotes are Identities that basically are stuck in their emotional trait, more-so than normal identities. That doesn’t mean they don’t have other emotions, but almost all the time, even if the event is opposite to their emotion, they will most-likely stay in their normal emotion.
Example: Someone dies. Emote-Identity is a happy-type, and stays happy.

Most of the time,...

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Viva la Verrostet - Chapter 1

posted by ripperoo1

CHAPTER 1
Journal Writing

"October VI, MMXI," I scribbled in a small book that I used as a journal. I thought and thought about what to write next. Nothing happens in my life, really. My typical دن is composed of playing chess, reading, and caring for my father who is too old to do simple things. Many would say that the way I live is different from normal, modern life. I live in a castle. My father is the king. Therefore, I'm the prince. I do everything for my father, so many people just look at me as the king's representative. I wish that something happened to my life, something interesting....

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Mobius Academy and other forums: How to keep it fun

posted by TakTheFox

So a lot of the time when I'm in a فورم it ends up that it's either me, Gracethefox, یا Sarathedog, that are the only ones staying on a forum, and I gotta say, it gets old, and BORING. I mean sure, WE aren't boring. We love rping together in forums, but we can't do it with JUST us the entire time.

Now I know a lot of people CAN'T get online at times, and when that happens there's nothing wrong, but when people CAN and just don't, it gets really annoying. I'm not saying that آپ have to get back on, but everyone just disappears and doesn't say why.

My guess is boredom. They get bored, and lazy...

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Sonic پرستار character guide:Gary-stus and mary-sues(Fun Gist Version)

posted by Mapware3640

Ok,we know آپ want to skip the mumbo jumbo and get straight to the information,WE CAN DO THAT!!!

Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater

A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out سے طرف کی takthefox)

The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If آپ make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If آپ make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes...

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Riley the بھیڑیا info

posted by silverstream101

Well...basicly i got bored and i desided 2 make something 4 Riley! its just going 2 b why i made him and stuff
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Riley is from the Sol Dimention like Ember and her oldest sister Nova. When Ember and Riley were little they played togather all the time. So when Ember "died" he didnt belive it and has been looking for her sence. He got word that a red cat has been seen in the Mobius Dimention and found a way to get there. He STILL hasnt found her but refuses to stop looking. So now hes somewhere in Mobius looking for Ember.
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Small? yes...but i was feeling lazy...so i WILL make a story version soon