MTL

Note: Oh no! Eggman is ahead! After attempting to rescue Lil, Rouge and Lilith, Tails was shot, Sonic was thrown into a sewage drain, and Myzak threatened! Now that Eggman has the secret to Ultimate Life, what will be in store for our heroes? Will they survive, یا never see the light of day?


Sonic gasped for air. The water was up to his nose now. He sputtered. Why didn't I listen to that Knucklehead anyway? He thought. “Help...” He called. No one replied. The water rushed up to his ears as he took a final breath. Soon, he would be gone. Just like that. The cold feeling turned to numbness....

Bullet found himself dozzing off while he worked on the shack for Maiyumi. 'Why am i even doing this for?' He thought. 'i barely even like her! i guess snice Bloosom will being staying here too i might aas well do the best i can for her at least.' Izzy climbed up to the roof where Bullet was. "hey how's it hanging?" she asked. "okay iguess. i had to work like this when i was eight for my first gruadian and i hated him مزید then i hate Maiyumi." Bullet repeiled. "Why do آپ hate her anyways?" Izzy asked. Bullet put down the hammer and took the nails out of his mouth. "Well i kinda like her but...

"Alright Cynthia, were home." says Silver as they arrive back at the apartments."Thanks Silver, I gotta get back to work." جوابات Cynthia as she hugs Silver good-bye.

"Ok, see ya later!" Silver admits while blushing.
Cynthia runs up to her apartment, unlocks the door, going to her computer.

"Time to learn مزید about that Hedgehog." says Cynthia as she types in Mars the Hedgehog in a تلاش area.After a little waiting she clicks on a full study about Mars.

"This wil-" stops Cynthia as she looks at the information about Mars in the location box as it says "Created in a Military Base."

Cynthia stops...

“We all know about those days when criminals break lose at the most unexpected times. We all know about those crazy, insane, sometimes even psychotic people, that have the tendency to kill off many innocent beings for no apparent reason. But this woman…is no different.”
    “She started off her childhood at a rough pace. She was a murderous demon, trapped in the soul of an innocent woman of age nineteen. Many spirits beyond the grave never understood the reason why they were killed off. She caused others to commit suicide, یا die of a broken heart.”
    “She...

Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if آپ missed it.
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are آپ doing?!" A prisoner shouted. مزید heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
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THE EGGMAN MECH whatched as the train passed by; then he threw a sticky bomb on it and set the timer for 3:00. The bot flew off.


Trance let Windy go.
"Were are آپ guys going?" he asked Windy.
"Wherever the train takes us."
Trance laughed.
"Same as always eh? I'm glad to see that آپ brought along your boyfreind Spike."
Windy turned a little red in the face.
"He is NOT my boyfreind!"
"Is too"
"Is not!"
"Too!"
"NOT!"
"To!"
They argued for some time.
"NOT!!!!!" Windy yelled while covering her face trying not to giggle a bit.
Trance looked at Spike.
"Just joking around a little!"
Spike didn't answer. He thought...

THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do آپ wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit مزید alert.
The train sped by. They all...

Chapter four: That’s Chells
Location: 66 Jazon Ave, Lexistropolis
Date: Sunday, November 30th 4337
Time: 8:51 P.M.

Tess and Zen Solomon, had finally made their way back to their neighborhood, panting and sweating; trying to think of an excuse as to how they would explain being at Lizzy’s house till eight thirty, of which they were to be home, and then heading off to go help their parents finish moving a friend into his new house. They knew that their parents would be cross; they just didn’t know how they would get out of it.

When they arrived home, there was a note on the dining room table....

"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ کہا to Emily. "Ok thank آپ AJ."Emily کہا to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca کہا yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one کہا in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...

Chris kept cheering. Eventually, he went to a Mobian store and bought a rug, a bed, wallpaper, a refrigerator, food, a TV, and a Nintendo 64. They were all very cheap, and either way, Chris had a lot of rings with him. He carried them all back to his home, one سے طرف کی one. Eventually, he got in his بستر and fell asleep. MEANWHILE, AT THE LOOP WHERE MADJIN WAS LAYING.... A smirk spread across Madjin's face He opened his eyes. They were glowing red. His hands started glowing. He blinked and his eyes stopped glowing. He slowly stood back up and chuckled. He slowly walked away. He saw a circular peice...

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu یا Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If آپ don't know the whole issue, here's some سوالات I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...

As the لومڑی noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a ماہ ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. فنچ inhabits it.Dr. فنچ was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the لومڑی wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very سب, سب سے اوپر of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young لومڑی knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason یا meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

“… There might have been a time when آپ actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want آپ to become something that آپ don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do آپ remember the first time آپ ever drew your پرستار character? When آپ created him/her, آپ had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that پرستار characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...