this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good یا not before I کرائیں جمع it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear love آپ once were a shining ray.
In my eyes آپ meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about آپ is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your love is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our love is coming to its new close.
Colors were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would love to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our love has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our love left it took آپ along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying love was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me love would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear love آپ once were a shining ray.
In my eyes آپ meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about آپ is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your love is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our love is coming to its new close.
Colors were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would love to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our love has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our love left it took آپ along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying love was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me love would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
she unloads his gun
She and he waits for this
he releases his love
In blue and green orbs
she gives him مزید and more
A million miles away
A million years girl
In a black woven chest
he digs his nails deep
She trusts in him for what he does
live in a house in the suburbs
He kisses the pain with blood and light
sleeping it off in the morning
A million miles away
A million years girl
In her world of his
she unloads his gun
In a world of his
she covers the sun
A million miles away
A million years
A million years girl
Well آپ see
I'm not myself anymore
Well آپ can see
What I've done
Blinded myself
Lost my direction
In this times
That are getting cold
In this moment
To behold
And shine
Here's a poem
For all the loved ones
Here's a grave
For all the dead
Here's the oxygen
For all the living
Here's a tissue
For tears that are shed
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی Myself
I'm gone now
I'm lost again
I'm lost
سے طرف کی myself
Well take your houses
Take your money
Take the things آپ don't need
Live the life
You've always wanted
And then burn the memories
Take the good times and the bad
Take the happy maybe the sad
And turn, turn yourself around
I'm lost in my own fairytale
Where I'm the winner
All over again
in my daydreams I've lost all hope
All ambition
Looking and losing an only friend
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی Myself
I'm gone now
I'm lost again
I'm lost
سے طرف کی myself
I'm lost
I'm here
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی myself
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی myself
سے طرف کی myself
I'm not myself anymore
Well آپ can see
What I've done
Blinded myself
Lost my direction
In this times
That are getting cold
In this moment
To behold
And shine
Here's a poem
For all the loved ones
Here's a grave
For all the dead
Here's the oxygen
For all the living
Here's a tissue
For tears that are shed
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی Myself
I'm gone now
I'm lost again
I'm lost
سے طرف کی myself
Well take your houses
Take your money
Take the things آپ don't need
Live the life
You've always wanted
And then burn the memories
Take the good times and the bad
Take the happy maybe the sad
And turn, turn yourself around
I'm lost in my own fairytale
Where I'm the winner
All over again
in my daydreams I've lost all hope
All ambition
Looking and losing an only friend
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی Myself
I'm gone now
I'm lost again
I'm lost
سے طرف کی myself
I'm lost
I'm here
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی myself
I'm lost now
I'm here now
I'm lost here
سے طرف کی myself
سے طرف کی myself