is my مضمون of twilight5- nice guys?

i wrote an مضمون for a fanfiction contest guys! its called the IMPENDING STORM.( twilight 5 )

i گیا کیا پوسٹ just one chapter, bot i want to know if people like that, so that i can continue.can u leave your تبصرہ and vote for me if u like it?